In the fast-pace society,competition among people is becoming more and more serious.Meanwhile,older people expect their kids succeed,hoping that they can achieve more.However,from my perspective,the rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Firstly,strict rules may cause negative effect to young people.Every young people own a dream which they want to be a successful person.However,putting too much pressure on them is of useless.We both recently heard news,people kill themselves because of too much pressure.Indeed,the trend is becoming more and more frequent.Health is always the most significant stuff for person.The rules that societies expect young people to follow may cause them psychological problem,it will even destroy a young person.
Secondly,parents order their children to spend their time studying and prevent them playing any games.That must be too strict too them.As we know,leisure is positive when people are in tiring status.For example,when I was young,my parents always push me to study everyone.Even I have finished my homework,I still forbidden to play games.The only thing I can do is to read the textbook and review my homework.However,it’s negative to my study.The result of my exam is always disappointed my parents.And then I have chance to play games after finishing my homework.Surprisingly,I can get better grade them before.Too strict rules to follow may not helpful to young people’s development.
Next,parents devote their kids have relationship when they are young.Parents worried about the bad influence when their child fall in love when they are young.But after graduation or they are college student,the thing that parents worry is opposed.Skipping the step,young people date,is always like something you don’t take mid-term exam but to attend final exam.There is always not good for young people.
In a word,societies expect too strict rule for young people to follow.Young people are supposed to have their space which may help their development.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 63
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67973856209 4.8611393121 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.87099193759 2.67179642975 145% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565359477124 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.1344086022 303% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 185.28399823 48.9658058833 378% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 347.6 100.406767564 346% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.2 20.6045352989 297% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.4 5.45110844103 338% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 45.0 5.5376344086 813% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252592160364 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178196896674 0.076458572812 233% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790269412222 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178196896674 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790269412222 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.9 11.7677419355 305% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.1 58.1214874552 2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 10.1575268817 279% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.55 10.9000537634 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.58 8.01818996416 132% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 10.002688172 300% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.0537634409 263% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.247311828 293% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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