It is indisputable that social rules have greatly played a pivotal role in every society because social rules are strong weapons to maintain peace and harmony in any given society Some people believe that social rules for young people today are too strict, while others think they are reasonable. I believe that social Rules for young people are not only reasonable. The number of controversies over this issue is overwhelming, I would explore some of the main issues which are more conspicuous for me in the following paragraphs.
The first significant point to be mentioned is that rules are the basic principle of our day to day life which helps young people to protect them from hurting themselves. statistical has shown that the people especially the younger ones are more likely to do something recklessly if they don’t confine with determent rules. For example, many students today get involved in drugs. Without rules against these substances, even more, students would try these things. Drugs can do long-term damage to young people's futures because their minds and bodies can be severely damaged; some even die from Overdosing.
Another interesting point which should need some words here is that all young people should follow the strict rules in order to have better lives if everybody obeys the law then it wouldn’t be drug dealers, murderers, thieves, and rapist. If it weren’t murderers, thieves, rapist and drug dealers then prisons would have a decreased number of prisoners. Families would be happier and more peace would be made throughout the world. That is why to make a better society considers obedience.
Due to the aforementioned reasons which I explored above, I believed that it is following the rules is questionably important for country prosperity and the government should executive some of the legislation in order to people have a better life.
- Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement it s better to make friends with intelligent people than with people who have a sense of humor 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. Agree or disagree? 76
- TPO-42 - Integrated Writing Task 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... issue is overwhelming, I would explore some of the main issues which are more conspicuous ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Statistical
...o protect them from hurting themselves. statistical has shown that the people especially th...
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Line 4, column 186, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ity and the government should executive some of the legislation in order to people have a b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18566775244 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71790094343 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553745928339 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.860585302 48.9658058833 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.461538462 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245598955901 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791602172824 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586626909944 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143378456556 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051605164364 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 11.7677419355 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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