The 20th century has brought it many advances, with those advancements, human’s lives have altered dramatically, Thus, people tend to keep themselves up with the news to find out what’s going on around them. Although the majority of people assert that these media are less worried about the accuracy of the news. However, as far as I concerned, I believe that they make a lot of effort to publish the most accurate new. There seen to be numbers of issue associated with the accuracy of the news, I would explore some of these issues which is more conspicuous for me in the following essay.
First and foremost, it is indisputable that news has played pivotal and crucial roles in human’s lives and it has affected both society and individual’s lives in several aspects. Thanks to the advance of technology especially the internet, people have access to an inordinate amount of information and various news through the internet. This way, these media are trying to give people more accurate and reliable news for the purpose of preserving their viewers and customers and also enticing new clients. If social media publish false news they will lose a huge amount of their viewers. The Statistic shows that the company which publishes more reliable news are more likely to have a greater customer rather than a newspaper which publish more fake news.
Another significant point that deserves some words here is that nowadays the government has tended to legislate some law in order to prevention of extending of fake news all over the country. In some cases, publishers will be penalized by the government due to inaccuracy in their news. My personal experience would be a great example of this issue, when I was a student, I used to work for my school’s newspaper and I was kind of jealous so I publish some wrong news in order to worn off some student’s popularity which caused I expelled from school’s newspaper and also I was castigated from m behavior by my teacher, thus I lost my legitimacy among students.
To sum up, due to the aforementioned reasons I have discussed above, the different media attempt to provide people with more accurate and reliable news.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 516, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ustomers and also enticing new clients. If social media publish false news they wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, thus, kind of, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95945945946 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84916785873 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545945945946 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.2094511246 48.9658058833 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.153846154 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4615384615 20.6045352989 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8709677419 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199851600404 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824605840701 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536753857239 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127537022047 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318694567468 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 11.7677419355 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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