All of the things in the world have advantages and disadvantages. Smartphones also have these issues. In my opinion, I believed that one can provide good to our society. They can be used for education, healthcare, and entertainment for all people.
To begin with, according to pandemic covid 19 situations, the education system is changed to an online learning system. Smartphone provides numerous learning applications. Moreover, people can explore on youtube, and social media platforms with that one to study various fields like languages, cooking, making DIY products. The more we use phones efficiently in education, the more knowledge we can acquire at one sitting. Drawing from my own experiences, during stay home period, I downloaded the Duolingo application on my phone, and I studied the French language. It has been easy to use, and I spent most of the time with it. After studying for three months, my skill is better than before. This is the profit of smartphones that I received from using smartphones.
Besides, the health care system services can obtain readily from smartphones. Most of the clinics and hospitals are offering an online booking system to avoid crowds due to Covid-19. It can be done by our phones without consuming time. For instance, in my country, old people can cure their illness at home by calling the moving doctors associations. Furthermore, people who like to play fitness at home can get training using phone applications.
Eventually, the benefits of smartphones cannot be inevitable for the entertainment sector. By staying at home, one can watch movies, and update series, and no need to go to the cinema. We can also play online games in groups, and get happiness. So, we do not feel lonely and have fun with our friends.
In a nutshell, the advantages of smartphones are undeniable. Thus, people should use these in a positive and better way to improve themselves and have a wonderful time. It will be the most useful tool if we use it wisely
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
All of the things in the world have advantages and...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99099099099 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88448091345 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582582582583 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3555491158 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.25 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.875 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140030359605 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459626831681 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391075829843 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883183482937 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337138797016 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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