Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
In our childhood we are always taught that we should not lie to other people, because earlier or sooner people will find out the truth. Though many people stick to this point of view, I believe there are some cases when it is better not to say the truth.
The first thing I have got on my mind it is when probably we should not say the whole truth to some people who do not prepare to hear this. We all have different social roles: a worker, a family member, or a friend, thus in one case we should tell the truth, in the other it is better to hide. For example, one of my friends has recently had a lot of important projects to finish. Her friend asked her for going to a party, but at the same time she always has taken offences on my friend because of the impossibility to go with her there since a friend of mine has got a lot of things to do for work. That’s why my friend lied to her friend that she was going to a business trip to another country. I think it helped them to avoid a quarrel and saved their friendship.
Secondly, sometimes it is better to lie to defend a person from bad news. I think we should consider falsehood as a positive thing to conceal awful events or bad information. Recently I have read a newspaper article in which the story about one doctor and his patient was mentioned. The doctor decided not to say to his patient that the last one had a harsh decease in order to protect him of panic. Otherwise, the doctor started treatment at once and after several months he saw a progress in the condition of the patient. The doctor said that panic could have led to worse consequences, because it was restricted to worry for the patient.
Personally I had had lately the case when I lied to a person. Since that person is still important for me, I did not want to abuse him anyway. When this person asked me to take his cat to look after, I had to say that my mom had allergy, but actually I did not have time for this that time. I think if I had told the truth, my friend would not have understood it.
Thus, I believe that sometimes it is better to lie and hide the truth, because some people are not ready to hear it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 481, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'progress'.
Suggestion: progress
...at once and after several months he saw a progress in the condition of the patient. The do...
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Line 5, column 619, Rule ID: WORRY_FOR[1]
Message: The verb 'worry' does not normally take the preposition 'for'. Did you mean 'worry about'?
Suggestion: worry about
...sequences, because it was restricted to worry for the patient. Personally I had had l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, anyway, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.18899521531 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27641227321 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468899521531 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5320031974 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1578947368 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0757486976797 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0266782814095 0.076458572812 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358022142353 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.054169522166 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346493322509 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 10.9000537634 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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