Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are two different ways for people who travel – some may travel on their own, while others may join the group of other tourist headed by a tour guide. In my personal view, the second option has more advantages that the first, that’s why I advocate the statement that it is a good idea to travel with a guide.
The first reason is because organizing my trip this way, I can feel more protected, because I will be with other people and a person who knows the location around. When a person is another country, there might occur some situations when you might be at risk. I think that being with a guide helps to avoid many such problems as to be robed or fooled. A guide is a person who knows well the place he is showing to his tourists, that’s why he will not show Skid Row. For example, when my friend visited Brazil their group avoided visiting the suburbs of Rio, because it was dangerous for their life.
The next reason is that since a guide knows the place better than a tourist who has just arrived in a new country or city, he may advise some interesting and unique places which cannot be found on the map or in the guide. I remember my trip to Prague where are a lot of narrow and tiny streets and lines in the historic center, that’s why I had to take a guide to show me around. It was impossible to find some places of interest without his help.
Moreover, a guide may help to avoid difficulties with misunderstanding because of a language. Even if a person can speak English, which is one of the most widespread languages in the world, he still may face problems with communicating with local people. For example, when last time I was in France near Strasburg, I wanted to visit a remote village 50 miles away. When I came to the railway station, I found out that the cashier could not speak English. That day I was not succeeded to buy any tickets, that’s why I booked a tour with a guide and I forgot about any troubles which may have happened.
Thus, traveling with a guide is a good solution for people who want to feel safety during their trip. Also, a guide may be helpful with the contacts with the locals as well as he can show some secret and hidden from tourist places.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, thus, well, while, as to, for example, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39371980676 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40179832779 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502415458937 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1217318073 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3529411765 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120019977018 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413172295876 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040131116683 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809461207176 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548160959538 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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