Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? There is nothing that young people can teach older people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position
As I am only twenty one years old, I always go to my grandma or grandpa to ask them for a wise piece of advice. There is a conception that the older we are getting, the more we know and the clever we are. That is why we often refer to older people for their point of view. But whether the young can teach something these older people. I think that there are some things.
The first of them may look pretty basic, but nowadays older people need the help of a younger generation with modern technology. Since our grandparents were born last century or even earlier, they do not have such things as mobile phones, computers, TV sets when they were children. This is the reason why they can be struggle with all these novate electronics. At the same time older people cannot avoid using them, because these things are an inherent part of our life. Here the young can teach them to use a mobile phone or a computer. For example, when I bought a phone to my grandparents, I spent several days to show them all functions of this.
The second this which young people can teach the older ones is to continue traveling. I think that people under 40 travel more often than those who above their 60. Sometimes the reason to stop traveling derives from the idea that it may look weird that an older person travels somewhere along the Mississippi river. In this case the young can exemplify that traveling is what funny to do despite the age. For example, I know who take his grandmother to Paris for a musical festival about which she had dreamed all her life. He described that she got unforgettable emotions, and that on their way home she said that she felt guilty that she had not go to the event earlier, because she thought that it would looks funny for a person of her age to be there.
Moreover, the young people can be a good example for much older ones that they should not be afraid to risk. When people are getting older, they assume that it is not time for a good risk, when they have already had a family and children. The young are good at risking; they do not hesitate to change their work places, locations or their lifestyle completely. And sometimes the older men should do the same if he feels that he needs to change something about his own life.
To sum up, I think there are some things where are the young may be teacher for older people. For instance, they can teach them how to use modern technology, but also they can bring some lessons about how to live this life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: twenty-one
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... He described that she got unforgettable emotions, and that on their way home she...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'look'
Suggestion: look
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me lessons about how to live this life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2034.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 462.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4025974026 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21582022297 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478354978355 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0378130876 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4347826087 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0869565217 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.34782608696 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214267056963 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754954777696 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066826615243 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128771593453 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171814624193 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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