Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Sometimes people think nowadays the media (TV, newspaper, Internet) are less concerned about the accuracy of news than in the past, and the incorrect information may cause more problems to the public.
There are always good and bad consequences following technological developments. Nowadays, the accuracy of the news indeed much less than before. With the development and progress of the network platform, the public has many ways to contact a variety of news meanwhile the authenticity of these news has also lost its guarantee.
Firstly, the development of the Internet has extended the birth of self-media. In other words, it is operated by an independent individual rather than by a company or government institution. Accordingly, these self-media content will also have a lot of news that they have made up. For example, they will exaggerate or falsify facts in order to gain higher popularity and flow, because that seems unreasonable news can really attract people’s attention.
At the same time, due to the lack of supervision by relevant departments, these fake news are more readily spread on the Internet. For instance, the onion news we familiar is typical to please the public in the form of fake news.
Secondly, although these fake news can be favored by the public, they will also cause some problems, especially in the life circle of the elders. Taking my parents as an example, my parents always send some fake news to me and tell me to pay attention to these things.such as eating some fruits can lead to poisoning or discovering unknown creatures in outer space, etc. These ridiculous news really makes my parents fearful, but obviously, it is totally unnecessary. But in this situation is hard to explain to my parents, because they are used to believe the news from the public media.
Finally, the news in the past indeed more accurate than it is now. Because in the past, all the news are from the government media such as official TV program, newspaper or official Internet platform and so on. There would be a special commissioner to review these news from the official media, therefore the credibility of these news is extremely high. In addition, the official media would not permit the mistake or fake news happened. Contrast with nowadays, because fake news and pictures are abundant and sometimes difficult to distinguish, even the official media will make false reports occasionally. For example, pictures of aliens processed by photoshop have been published many times by some official media.
According to the above statements, the current news does have an amount of false content, some of which will affect the public and some just to entertain the public. It is precisely because of this that the public needs to read these news with critical thinking to prevent to lost in the massive information.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 290, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...y of news meanwhile the authenticity of these news has also lost its guarantee. Firstl...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hese news has also lost its guarantee. Firstly, the development of the Internet...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...e the public in the form of fake news. Secondly, although these fake news can b...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to believing'.
Suggestion: used to believing
...explain to my parents, because they are used to believe the news from the public media. Fi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...lieve the news from the public media. Finally, the news in the past indeed mor...
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Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...uld be a special commissioner to review these news from the official media, therefore the ...
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Line 8, column 325, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...ial media, therefore the credibility of these news is extremely high. In addition, the off...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...hed many times by some official media. According to the above statements, the c...
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Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'these newses'?
Suggestion: this news; these newses
...e of this that the public needs to read these news with critical thinking to prevent to lo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2226.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 441.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04761904762 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84800034572 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510204081633 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7542752438 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09523809524 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211134316765 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737788980124 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388215767605 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116790718987 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335030776726 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.