Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? For the successful development of a country, it is more important for a government to spend money on the education of very young children (five to ten years old) than to spend money on universities. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Education plays a pivotal role in engendering civilized citizens in any country. Although, imparting education to young is important but benefits from university education such as better job opportunities, contribution in economic growth of the society cannot be evaded. Therefore, I believe that government should not ignore universities in terms of funding. I will explore the reasons in the subsequent paragraphs.
First of all, higher level education provides better job opportunities to the students. By pursuing major in subject of interest, people can earn their livelihood. Because, employers prefer person having university degree for certain jobs along with experience. For example, when I completed my high school and went for job interviews, the job providers had strictly told me to earn university degree to get higher paying jobs. Ultimately, I was compelled to go for higher studies. Thus, university education is of utmost importance, if a person wants to grab high paying job with benefits.
Secondly, well-educated citizens will assist in the economic growth of the nation. After getting university degree many students prefer to run their own business, which will in turn contribute in the economic development of the country. For instance, one of my friends after graduating started his own law firm is now contributing to the government in terms of taxes. In this way, government funding for university education will ultimately come back to the government's deposit. This is the reason, why university education is vital.
Finally, university education shapes the overall personality of graduates. Different programs like debates, concerts, inter- university competitions, seminars and group discussions collectively mold students’ way of thinking. For example, a graduate will be more confident with an effective communicational and analytical skills as compared to a high school student. Consequently, this will lead to productive workforce in future.
In conclusion, government should think from broader perspective and focus upon being resourceful to university education, which will provide fruitful returns within a span of time.
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72445820433 4.8611393121 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16368073105 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606811145511 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2937347606 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.45 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.15 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181405300565 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056422821046 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388766449371 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973884759662 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033636935628 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 58.1214874552 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.6 10.9000537634 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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