Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only do what they know how to do well.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I believe taking a risk and trying new things is much better than doing the actions we know how to do well for a long time which is done over and over for years. Trying new things is useful most of the time because it leads to making progress and alters the world to a better place. Also, taking risks through trying new things may bring failure at the end, but we learn lots of things and gain experience. As the final reason, people can know themselves better when face with new situations, and some of their talents will be flourished which they do not know existed before that.
First, trying new chances and ways bring improvement to our lives even if it involves some risks. Take a world that does not consist of any progress and improvements for instance. Children and people die from the illness every day. In this world, if doctors and scientists do not risk their lives by conducting researches on the origins of illnesses and do not try possible ways to find cures of diseases, the situation won't change never and everything remains just like it was before. But, we see huge improvements today, which are the result of the new experiments which they planned.
Second, even if trying new ways leads to failure, gaining new experience and knowledge worth the attempts which we made. New movements always involve risks and we can not ignore this fact. However, If you do not fail 100 times, you won't win one time. But, the important point here is the things you learn in each attempt and the power you obtain by this. For example, the Apollo project failed many times until it succeeded. On every try which was completed with defeat, people working on that project discover new things and implemented new points until one day it accomplished with success.
Finally, most people have great capabilities and talents, Although they have not found their abilities just because they have not tried their chances to face new things even one time. Take me, for instance. going to college was a new weird experience for me. If I had not gone to college five years ago, I would not have discovered my talent in the Computer science field. I owe my prospering business and gaining knowledge about myself to that period.
To summarize, I think trying new things, traveling to new places, and using new chances are the best we can do to improve our world and ourselves. Instead of doing one repetitive job, which we are great on doing it, over and over until the day we pass away.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only do what they know how to do well Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- The runic alphabet is a set of letters made up of forms called runes This writing system was used by various Germanic groups in central and northern Europe as early as 150 AD until about 1100 AD The origins of this alphabet have remained unclear but archa 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Children
...progress and improvements for instance. children and people dye from illness every day. ...
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Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...earches on the origins of illnesses and dont try possible ways to find cures of dise...
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Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...w movements always involve risks and we cant ignore this fact. However, If you dont ...
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Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... cant ignore this fact. However, If you dont fail 100 times, you wont win one time. ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Going
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, well, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2038.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66361556064 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3220174753 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517162471396 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4828385961 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6363636364 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8636363636 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.40909090909 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297365273691 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819218614875 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695714074396 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172824576625 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906103812484 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.