Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
n every corner of the world, Teaching is considered a very honorable profession. With the advancement of technology and modernization of education systems in today's world, teaching profession has been taken a dimensional turn in its course as profession. In my opinion, I disagree with the idea that teachers are not appreciated and valued by the society than in the past. To begin with, we admire teachers more than before now a days because they are very friendly and helpful to the students than their previous generation. Students in the classes always desire a person in the school who can take care of their problems and support them except their parents. Therefore, Teachers taking the responsibilities are really doing great for the society. For instance, my younger brother who is now a college student, always appreciates his elementary school teacher Miss Hudson. As he was very emotional and used to cry in the class, Miss Hudson took care of his problem instead of scolding him. Consequently, Her affection to my brother made him confident and we are really greatful to her. Moreover, She is not only part of our family but also has been to all of our town. Secondly, Teachers now a days has adapted modern teaching technique which is very phenomenal. They can make contact with the students and parents while they are not present in the class. Besides, their constant guidance for the students helps to elevate their career which is very important for their progress. From my experience, when I was very confused to choose my medical school for financial aid problem, I took help from my high school science teacher in this matter. He helped me to sort out the schools in the matter of financial issues, even though he was in vacation to Europe by searching in the internet, social media. Eventually, I got a great confidence and was able to make my decision. In conclusion, Teachers are more valued and respected by all the persons of society as they are very helpful and empathetic for building their student's career and society as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86857142857 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71396088282 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531428571429 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8721389834 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.235294118 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5882352941 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11764705882 5.45110844103 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144970320767 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553636235612 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806062242775 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144970320767 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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