Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree that teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. The reasons are as follows.
First of all, teachers nowadays have less influence on students than in the past, and that made them be less appreciated and valued by society than in the past. For example, students today have easier access to the resources of what they want to learn than they did before. They can acquire a lot of knowledge from videos on YouTube now, and also there are a lot of online learning platforms such as Coursera, Udemy, etc. Therefore, students nowadays are less influenced by their teacher, while in the past they could probably only obtain knowledge from teachers.
Secondly, teachers nowadays have less impact on academic research than they did in the past, so they are less appreciated and valued by society than they were before. For example, in the field of Artificial Intelligence, most giant technology companies today hire researchers with great reputations to do research in the domain, while in the past, most of the great researchers are professors in universities. Hence, teachers nowadays have less contributions to academia, and that may be the reason that they are less valued and appreciated now.
Finally, teachers in today's society have relatively ordinary salaries than they did before, and that leads to the decreased extents of respect for them. For example, teachers used to be a very high-paid job, and a lot of people dreamed of becoming one. However, many other high-paid jobs appear now while teachers' salaries remain unchanged. Thus, teacher became a job with average salaries, which causes that less people nowadays dream to be a teacher. As a result, the social status of teachers fall down from a significantly high point to an ordinarily medium point.
To conclude, teachers nowadays are less appreciated and valued by society than they were in the past because they have less influence on students and less contribution to academia, and also their salaries become relatively low now. Therefore, I definitely agree with the statement.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 441, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun contributions is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ersities. Hence, teachers nowadays have less contributions to academia, and that may...
^^^^
Line 7, column 410, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ith average salaries, which causes that less people nowadays dream to be a teacher. ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11304347826 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6971384402 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457971014493 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.537508595 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.25 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341057552372 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140482786201 0.076458572812 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114669243233 0.0737576698707 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263945292144 0.150856017488 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114866256423 0.0645574589148 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 441, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun contributions is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ersities. Hence, teachers nowadays have less contributions to academia, and that may...
^^^^
Line 7, column 410, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ith average salaries, which causes that less people nowadays dream to be a teacher. ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 345.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11304347826 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6971384402 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457971014493 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.537508595 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.25 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 5.45110844103 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341057552372 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140482786201 0.076458572812 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114669243233 0.0737576698707 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263945292144 0.150856017488 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114866256423 0.0645574589148 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.