Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made the world a better place to live. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Nowadays, with the rapid development of the technology, it becomes an important part of humans’ life. Some people think that technology has made the world a better place to live, but some people do not agree with this idea. I, however, think that technology has made the world a higher quality place to live because it improves our transportation, it is convenient and it is comfortable.
Firstly, with the modern technology, people can have many kinds of transportations. At the past, people had to go by bicycle or on foot; it is really difficult for people to move far away. So in the early 19 century, people with some technology had made the first motorbike to remove that problem. Furthermore, today we have many airplanes, cars, ships, vessels to help us to travel easily.
Secondly, technology is extremely convenient for people, especially for many people who live far from their family. For example, my uncle has lived and worked in America for 15 years, but my grandmother and my family are living in Vietnam so that it is very difficult to contact with him face to face. In spite of that, we can contact him through email or telephone calls. Furthermore, it is extremely helpful when you have to face up to an emergency situation. For instance, a few days ago, I need to bring my research for my literature class and I had left if at home. So I was totally worried because it is the deadline of the research. If I did not hand in the paper, I would have gotten a worse score. Then, in this case, I had to call my father to bring it to me. Thus, it is highly convenient for many people.
Finally, I assume that technology is really comfortable. It is the summer in Vietnam now, it is extremely hot. However, sitting in the air-conditioned room, people do not have to suffer from the hot weather anymore. Thank for the modern technology, today, people do not need to be in the trouble with the hot weather or cold weather.
In conclusion, I believe that technology has made the world a greater position to live because it improves our transportation, it is convenient and it is comfortable
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 209, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
...le to move far away. So in the early 19 century, people with some technology had made t...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.198135198135 0.229887763892 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.16317016317 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0769230769231 0.0866891130778 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0675990675991 0.046263068375 146% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0932400932401 0.0685040099705 136% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.114219114219 0.118717715034 96% => OK
Participles: 0.02331002331 0.0351676179071 66% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83079198853 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.041958041958 0.0309702414327 135% => OK
Particles: 0.002331002331 0.00188951952338 123% => OK
Determiners: 0.0745920745921 0.0887237588012 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00699300699301 0.0209618222197 33% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.004662004662 0.0139019557991 34% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2106.0 2387.08602151 88% => OK
No of words: 374.0 408.028673835 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.63101604278 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.307486631016 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.22192513369 0.251872472559 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.152406417112 0.174417080927 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114973262032 0.112833075102 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83079198853 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486631016043 0.524397521467 93% => OK
Word variations: 51.6342024352 59.2087087015 87% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8095238095 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0764974973 48.84282405 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.285714286 120.699889404 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8095238095 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.644075263715 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 40.0020371785 45.7405998639 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.03597122302 1.45489161554 71% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326912475738 0.300154397459 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0995677363428 0.103427244359 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.094024353826 0.0752933317313 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.499011530174 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.191741558532 0.151897553556 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125335895054 0.114077575197 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819886848955 0.0781384742642 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.346759410945 0.336927656856 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0385615830316 0.067059652881 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237913224082 0.210909579961 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632504020365 0.0618886996521 102% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.86379928315 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
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Rates: 67.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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