Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? There is never a reason to be impolite to others.
It is universally acknowledged that being a polite one not only facilities people’s communication, but also give rise to the argument recently that if we should stick to be polite in such hectic crowed life. Though some put we have not to be friendly because we are able to just focus on other more valuable issues, I strongly believe that politeness is invaluable particularly with the following reasons.
Admittedly, living in such a world undergoing constant changes, individuals work around the clock so they have less awareness and energy to keep polite, as through paying much attention on works on their own, they can earn higher salaries and more profits, which are the most pragmatic goal for them and they can achieve a sense of fulfillment. However, they have not been aware that being polite make them success easier to a great extent.
For starters, promising career future needs elites with politeness. Chances are high that being not polite means an individual with poor ability of communication and cooperation. Chances are also high that in this situation one can only work by himself/herself but not achieve a collective assignment, as his/her colleagues may reject to collaborate with him/her. Yet, collective achievement is always a lot more elaborated than one’s hard working, which means a person with poor politeness are less likely to attain great performance to say nothing of promotion. The experience of my Uncle Tom serves as a good example. He mostly never pays any attention to his words and deeds when talking with others. He recently turned 35, yet be still works as an entry-level employee in a small local firm. Thus, we can see that without politeness, people usually have obstacles to do a good job in career.
In addition, people would like to respect the one polite. For example, if you don’t show your politeness to others, they, thinking you not respect them, will never respect you, because people’s attitude toward you depends on your behavior. Besides that, showing polite is always related to high-quality and refinement. Thus, the public will regard you as one worthy to be respected. We are also told that, being polite means you have to keep smiling and being in neat dress, which promote you appearance and spirit. It is the case that the public are more willing to show respect to a pretty person.
Finally, a polite person is more likely to be happy. This can be reflected by research conducted by the Chinese Academy of Sciences (CAS) suggesting that a large proportion of (about two thirds) participants, mainly adults with ages ranging from 25-40, have shown much happier not only in career, but family lives and social communication because they are used to remain polite consciously or unconsciously. That is, according to researchers, the process of polite pleases yourself as well as others, because others will enjoy the moment with you.
In conclusion, regardless of the small merits of ignoring polite, being polite would make you easier to get promoted, be respected and maintain happy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 353, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to remaining'.
Suggestion: used to remaining
...d social communication because they are used to remain polite consciously or unconsciously. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, however, if, may, so, still, third, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2573.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 506.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08498023715 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.789716628 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 279.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551383399209 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 800.1 618.680645161 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.4372258717 48.9658058833 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.954545455 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68181818182 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198562596473 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617113552766 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049376286139 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105185266804 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442872496159 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 86.8835125448 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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