Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To truly enjoy a vacation (holiday), people should leave their mobile phones at home.
Nowadays, with the advancement of technology, people become increasingly dependent on smart phones. Some people argues that the phone actually disturbs people’s rest and face to face communication so it should be left at home when going vacation to enjoy a real relax, which seems plausible. From my perspective, however, cell phone really plays an indispensable role in our lives and it is better to bring it with us.
Firstly, cell phones can prevent many emergencies and guarantee our safety. As we all know, many unexpected things may happen when you are far from home, without a connecting device, you may find yourself in a helpless situation. On the contrary, if your cell phone is with you, you can easily search help from your friends, your families and even the internet. Your mom and dad could get the latest location and situation of you and will be less worried at home.
Moreover, going out without mobile phones can really cause many inconvenience. Actually, there are so many helpful apps on a smart phone, such as the Google map and WeChat pay. Such a small device could offer so many useful functions. As a result, if you persist to leave your phone home, then it means you have to bring the paper map, the cash, the camera as well as so many things with you, which is much more heavy than a smart phone. How could you really enjoy your trip with such a heavy bag on your back? And what should you do if there is something you forget to bring? Obviously it is very inconvenient!
Admittedly, it is probably true that we sometimes just focus on our phone too much, ignoring the beautiful sights as well as families around us. However, such things can be easily controlled. We could just make a bet with friends that the first one playing his/her phone should make a treat. What’s more, phones can really help create unforgettable memories by its camera and note functions. We may find the travel much more wonderful when we go back home, overlying on the sofa, reviewing the photos on the phone.
To put all into a nutshell, it is my firm belief that people won’t be more enjoyable at travel without mobile phones because of the convenient functions and safety guarantee the phone can offer.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun inconvenience seems to be countable; consider using: 'many inconveniences'.
Suggestion: many inconveniences
... without mobile phones can really cause many inconvenience. Actually, there are so many helpful ap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, then, well, such as, as a result, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1849.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75321336761 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55559835061 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526992287918 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1893196291 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3157894737 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4736842105 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270582408384 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833342322729 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585921553904 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158730732673 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446913083781 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.