Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are different types of workers in today's society. Some people argues that workers doing similar tasks all day long will be more satisfied because they will be more familiar with their work and can complete it with less time and energy, which sounds plausible. From my perspective, however, it is more satisfying for workers to do different kinds of tasks for the following reasons.
Firstly, it will be too boring and unbearable to repeat the same work all day long. Just imagine a place that require you to learn math all day long as well as everyday, would you bear such requirement? How long could you endure in this environment? I mean, all you could do is studying math! I really think it would be a hall for me, and I think it's why the school arrange different classes for us in one day. So as to workers, I think it is better to offer different tasks for them to complete which will make their life not so boring.
Moreover, workers may learn some more new knowledge by doing different tasks and meeting new friends. Different tasks may need different skills, workers could learn and practice those skills when they do the work, which may be beneficial to them in the future. If one day, they do not want to stay in this factory and want to change their job, then these skills may help them to find new jobs easily. Also, because they have to go different places to learn and do other tasks, it is more likely that they could make new friends who will help them a lot in the future.
Although it is probably true that doing different types of tasks may require more time and energy to do the job at first, but in the long run, it's worth it. They will be increasingly proficient with all kinds of tasks and one day and could finish all these tasks with little strength.
In conclusion, it's my firm belief that doing different tasks in work is more beneficial to workers because they are less likely boring and can also learn new skills and make more friends during work time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...u to learn math all day long as well as everyday, would you bear such requirement? How l...
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Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: To
...ge different classes for us in one day. So as to workers, I think it is better to offer ...
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Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help them find' instead.
Suggestion: help them find
...change their job, then these skills may help them to find new jobs easily. Also, because they hav...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...with little strength. In conclusion, its my firm belief that doing different tas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, then, well, as to, i mean, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23736371683 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453296703297 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7609246216 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.2 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2666666667 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 5.45110844103 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399924663153 0.236089414692 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149983695736 0.076458572812 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643542152836 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251376322491 0.150856017488 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673015520188 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 58.1214874552 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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