Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Man needs to move from one place to another place for living. Cars are the best invention of modern engineering and technology. Although some people believe that as the amount of fossil fuels is decreasing, the number of cars will also be decreased in twenty years. However, In my view, I think that because of the increasing economy in underdeveloped and developing countries and the increasing renewable energy, the number of cars will be increased day by day.
First, the economical condition is developing in third world countries. People of the third world are following the lifestyle of developed countries, which triggers them to buy their own car. For example, My uncle does a government job in Bangladesh which is the most promising developing country, and Bangladesh bank is now giving car loans to their govt. employee. My uncle has a family of 5 members and owned a car 5 years ago. Because of the govt. loan, he intends to buy another car that will be used by other family members.
Second, fossils fuel is decreasing, but in coming years, other alternative sources of energy will be discovered, and meanwhile developed countries are using this kind of energy. For instance, Elon Musk's car company recently has invented TESLA which runs by using electricity. And this electricity can be produced from nuclear energy or renewable energy like solar, wind, sea wave, etc.
Third, the demand for new superb designs in cars is getting high and it causes a single person to have two cars in their home parking lot. For example, my cousin has two cars, one car is for regular doing office, another car which is fancier and looking great and used to go to a party. This example illustrates that men are now using multiple cars for multiple purposes.
In conclusion with the above in mind, in twenty years cars' number will not be reduced but will be increased than are today because of alternative energy sources and increased economy of third world countries.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, so, third, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90149253731 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61558636776 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528358208955 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5940368325 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5882352941 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7058823529 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82352941176 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233536266904 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751083574795 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609487658219 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139628274838 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441776329884 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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