Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In our days car is the most common way of transportation. In comparing with other transports, cars is best in combining comfort, acceptability, and efficiency. I disagree with the statement that there will be fewer cars in around twenty years and here are my justifications.
To begin with, cars in most cases needed in our life. They can make life much more easier. And also, cars is can be individualized under wishes of their owners. So, cars are in priorities for the majority of people. Your car may some kind reflects your social status, can be luxury indicator. Thus, almost everyone wish to buy a car, or upgrade from their previous one, even if it costs an arm and a leg. Starting with our childhood we always been assured with the idea that we have to buy the best car that can be afforded. For example, I plan to buy a car in near future, when I'll be older than 18, for covering my needs for transportation and uppering my social status.
Moreover, cars are good components for profitable business. People are ready to pay large amounts of money for buying a car; that's unlikely that car companies will reduce their amount of gain. Also, car owners are ready to pay for services, fuels, and accessories for their cars. All this leads companies that profit from cars to a lot of propaganda and advertising about idealization of having a car. Cars can be profitable not only for big companies and corporations, but also for ordinary owners of cars. To illustrate this situation, car owner can be a taxi driwer and turn a penny from this, or, simply, rent out his or her car.
Finally, the numbers of cars dramatically increased in compating with the last decades, and this numbers not likely to go down. With the increase of human population and of level of life in many countries, the number of required cars will increase as well.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...ed in our life. They can make life much more easier. And also, cars is can be individualize...
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Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[5]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'been'.
Suggestion: been always
...d a leg. Starting with our childhood we always been assured with the idea that we have to b...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 580, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... plan to buy a car in near future, when Ill be older than 18, for covering my needs...
^^^
Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...arge amounts of money for buying a car; thats unlikely that car companies will reduce...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, in most cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66055045872 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70164404865 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574923547401 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3331001124 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2105263158 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2105263158 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196257506843 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734221992162 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688577140846 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141502668661 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675741187936 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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