Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students sports activities as they give to their univesity libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students sports activities as they give to their univesity libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
In today's life universities have great effects on student life. Universities provide not only the information need for the stuents to advance their future career but also provide the best education environment for the students to study. In this case, whether the university spend the same amount of money on library as well as sport activities, is a controversial topic in our university. Some people believe that the university is just academic institution and it should focus only on the education process, others strongly oppose the idea. In my views, people should take into their account many factors and consideration before they agree or disagree with the statment.
There is no doubt that sports activities are significantly important for students health and well beign. However, spending the same amount of money on sports activities as library could have some negative consequences on the university and the students. For example, building sports facilities such as soccer field, basktball and tense court can be significantly costly. Moreover, the miantainence of those facilities can consume most of the university budget. Design less money for the library can lower the books qualities offered by the university. Given that most of science refrances are extremely costly, lacking funds will prevent the university from buying such an important refrances. Ultimately, the unersity will losses it reputation among the others if they can not updated their library with the latest text books and refrances.
On the other hand, sports facilities provides a great environment for the students to study more effectively. Students are continuousely under tremendous stress from different area. They could easily get stressed from financial burden or simply from repeated exams. In order to relieve stress, they need to relax or play some sports. Therefore, the university should encourage the students to participate more in sport activities such as water bolling or football to steam out some of their stress. If the studetns just focus on thier study, they may end up dpressed or mentally ill.
As a conclusion, we can safely say that, before we agree or disagree, we should looks for the topic from different prespective. We should indicate which is the weaker subject that the university have. If the university previously neglects sports activities, then it should focus more on building sports facilities and the verses vise.
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Essay evaluation report II
the university is just academic institution
the university is just an academic institution
Ultimately, the unersity will losses it reputation
Ultimately, the university will lose its reputation
if they can not updated their library
if they can not update their library
sports facilities provides a great environment
sports facilities provide a great environment
we should looks for the topic
we should look for the topic
that the university have
that the universities have
Sentence: Universities should give the same amount of money to their students sports activities as they give to their univesity libraries.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to students and sports
Sentence: In this case, whether the university spend the same amount of money on library as well as sport activities, is a controversial topic in our university.
Description: The fragment university spend the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace spend with verb, past tense
Sentence: There is no doubt that sports activities are significantly important for students health and well beign.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to students and health
Sentence: Design less money for the library can lower the books qualities offered by the university.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to books and qualities
Sentence: Universities should give the same amount of money to their students sports activities as they give to their univesity libraries.
Error: univesity Suggestion: university
Sentence: Universities provide not only the information need for the stuents to advance their future career but also provide the best education environment for the students to study.
Error: stuents Suggestion: students
Sentence: In my views, people should take into their account many factors and consideration before they agree or disagree with the statment.
Error: statment Suggestion: statement
Sentence: There is no doubt that sports activities are significantly important for students health and well beign.
Error: beign Suggestion: being
Sentence: For example, building sports facilities such as soccer field, basktball and tense court can be significantly costly.
Error: basktball Suggestion: basketball
Sentence: Moreover, the miantainence of those facilities can consume most of the university budget.
Error: miantainence Suggestion: maintained
Sentence: Given that most of science refrances are extremely costly, lacking funds will prevent the university from buying such an important refrances.
Error: refrances Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Ultimately, the unersity will losses it reputation among the others if they can not updated their library with the latest text books and refrances.
Error: unersity Suggestion: uneasily
Error: refrances Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Students are continuousely under tremendous stress from different area.
Error: continuousely Suggestion: continuously
Sentence: Therefore, the university should encourage the students to participate more in sport activities such as water bolling or football to steam out some of their stress.
Error: bolling Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: If the studetns just focus on thier study, they may end up dpressed or mentally ill.
Error: dpressed Suggestion: dressed
Error: thier Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: studetns Suggestion: students
Sentence: As a conclusion, we can safely say that, before we agree or disagree, we should looks for the topic from different prespective.
Error: prespective Suggestion: prospective
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 10 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 16 2
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Don't put the essay topic inside the essay body
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 19 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 10 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 16 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 423 350
No. of Characters: 2213 1500
No. of Different Words: 216 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.535 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.232 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.726 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 166 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 121 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 91 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 61 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.625 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.707 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.458 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.291 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.49 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.082 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 437, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ople believe that the university is just academic institution and it should focus...
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Line 3, column 580, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ea. In my views, people should take into their account many factors and considera...
^^
Line 5, column 779, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'update'
Suggestion: update
...tation among the others if they can not updated their library with the latest text book...
^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'no doubt', 'such as', 'as well as', 'in my view', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.280172413793 0.229887763892 122% => OK
Verbs: 0.125 0.158761421928 79% => OK
Adjectives: 0.073275862069 0.0866891130778 85% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0603448275862 0.046263068375 130% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0495689655172 0.0685040099705 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122844827586 0.118717715034 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0150862068966 0.0351676179071 43% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.79957945046 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0215517241379 0.0309702414327 70% => OK
Particles: 0.00431034482759 0.00188951952338 228% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0969827586207 0.0887237588012 109% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0366379310345 0.0209618222197 175% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00215517241379 0.0139019557991 16% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2691.0 2387.08602151 113% => OK
No of words: 423.0 408.028673835 104% => OK
Chars per words: 6.36170212766 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.406619385343 0.338922669872 120% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.297872340426 0.251872472559 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.224586288416 0.174417080927 129% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1536643026 0.112833075102 136% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79957945046 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520094562648 0.524397521467 99% => OK
Word variations: 58.9123250157 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.3913043478 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8928329407 48.84282405 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 120.699889404 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3913043478 20.5533526081 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.739130434783 0.644075263715 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 48.1785383904 45.7405998639 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.77981651376 1.45489161554 122% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.526853393689 0.300154397459 176% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101077447137 0.103427244359 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0690226384805 0.0752933317313 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.483552160969 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.130764080715 0.151897553556 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183440812199 0.114077575197 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149203509588 0.0781384742642 191% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.330901776246 0.336927656856 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0776990548041 0.067059652881 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.409287548225 0.210909579961 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.299128842258 0.0618886996521 483% => Less connections among paragraphs
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.86379928315 285% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
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Rates: 53 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 16 Out of 30
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