Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The way a person dresses reflects his/her characters. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People nowadays dress up in varieties of ways and relatively freer than people in the past, so that a general perception emerged, which says the way a person dresses reflects characters. I am not all for it and consider that dress styles have little to do with characters.
Admittedly, people are more willing to choose what they like and follow their hearts, in some extent, follow their characters. Take my mom and aunt, for example, though they are sisters, they prefer totally different dress styles. My mom always wears high quality shirt and pants or some coats in dark color, on the contrary, my aunt has a fondness for bright skirt. And their characters comfort to their clothes completely. To be more specific, mom is mature and steady and loves reading book quietly. But my aunt is interested in entertainment with great enthusiasm oppositely. It is spontaneous to pick up the clothes according to the personality, so dresses can reflect people’s characters now and then.
However, it is the fact that not everyone has the chance to dress up as prefer. People maybe not allowed to get dress in their styles or need to dress up differently in special situations. If parents regard short skirt as the bad designed clothes, no matter how deeply you love it, you are still asked to stay away from skirt and wear long dress which is out of your character since parents think it looks more dignified. And for people in social situations, they are supposed to concern on surrounding and then decide what to dress. Such as teacher, this specific career requires them to select clothes that makes them appear more intellectual and helps them establish authority among the students. It is hard to imagine a teacher standing in front of the class wearing gym suit even she is active and a sports fun. It proves that it is impossible to figure out characters from people’s dressing styles.
Furthermore, it is also common that in order to pursue change, some people tend to wear clothes that are contrary to their personalities. The best approach to create different version of yourself is starting to change the dressing style. Sweet girl may begin to wear leather coat after breaking up with boyfriend; easy going person will turn t-shirt into suit when decide to become a successful businessman; spice girl gets off her heels because she got married and prepares to have a child. Dressing what you like is not rely on the person what you are, it is relative to numerous reasons. That why I mentioned that judging people by appearances is a superficial and incorrect way.
To put it in a nut shell, although there are some cases that people’s dressing styles reflect their characters, they make a choice through many other factors, such as social environment, parents’ influence and the desire to change. Thus, it is justified to say the way a person dresses reflects characters.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'getting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: getting
... up as prefer. People maybe not allowed to get dress in their styles or need to dress ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, still, then, thus, for example, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2409.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 493.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88640973631 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71206996034 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6480091243 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553752535497 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5924549609 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.739130435 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4347826087 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69565217391 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196660639709 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058521216793 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484094982723 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120755996078 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315148229768 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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