Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? "We should always tell the truths". Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to whether to keep telling the truth at all time, many may agree with this idea. That honesty possibly creates trust makes it a good choice to some. Nevertheless, I strongly believe that a white lie betters us in many ways.
To begin with, truths can sometimes be hurtful. Life is not all about beautiful flowers and sweet fruit. Sometimes, it is simply an unsuitable new outfit of his girlfriend that a man is advised not to tell. At other time, it is a terrible accident happening to her child which a mother of heart attack should not be confirmed. While mental strength is considered as a wonderful cure for those struggling with severe diseases, concealing patients from their serious condition is seemingly a marvelous remedy. This allows them to overcome their troubles with health, or spend their last moments in life with joy and hope. In many cases, white lies prove to be ideal keys to countless problems.
What is more, not always telling truths help maintain and value privacy. We all have our own secrets. Sometimes, it is not that our story is guilty, and we do not want to reveal it to others. It is solely because we wish to keep it for ourselves. A pure, passionate but unfinished first love with its unforgettably remaining scarf is forever a painful, but beautiful memory we just want to cherish all our whole life. All the heavy burdens of family and work are obstacles we need to try our best and silently overcome. It is no use telling to anyone else. On the other hand, disclosing too much about us to a new friend, such as our education, career, family, just makes the listener think of us not as an honest person but a show-off. Sometimes, it is much better with less talk and more listen.
Many proponents of honesty may argue that telling lies can ruin relations, creating distance among persons. Nonetheless, this is not always true. In fact, it is when sometimes not telling truths that we can avoid unnecessary tension, saving such numerous relationships. People are always a little different from each other. This “makes room” for arguments and conflicts to occur. In a romantic relationship, while the woman selfishly wishes to control all over her man’s privacy, little lies from the man may be helpful to maintain their connection in peace. It is not necessary that the man should keep secrets with his woman for all his relations and thoughts. Yet, it will be less “breathless” not to let her spy on him for every minor issue, like all his personal messages and calls, his friends, or how he spend his free time. By wisely managing on what and how to share with his woman, the man himself can develop his romantic relation into a good way.
“Lies that built are better than truths that destroy.” – Senegalese, a famous psychologist. White lies not only save us from pointless conflicts and grow up healthy relations but hamper us from hurting others’ feeling. Additionally, via not always telling truths, we can keep our privacy as expected.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: much may; a good deal of may
... to keep telling the truth at all time, many may agree with this idea. That honesty poss...
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Line 5, column 704, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st makes the listener think of us not as an honest person but a show-off. Sometim...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, while, in fact, such as, in many cases, to begin with, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2525.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 523.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82791586998 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78217453174 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74530640541 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544933078394 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 765.9 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7644081526 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4516129032 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8709677419 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45161290323 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185583137995 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493007006364 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465298418283 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105966286024 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359569350488 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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