Do you agree or disagree with the following statement When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e mail they will produce better work for the project Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e-mail, they will produce better work for the project. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Persnally, I definitely think that working on a project with my group using e-mail is more effective that doing it personaly. Therefore I disagree with the given statement. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

First of all, it is more time efficient to comunicate together on e-mail or any other applications such as WhatsApp or Facebook than doing it personally. Obviously, when you want to work with your group, you have to make an apointment with all of the group member where all of them are free. Because if a single member was not able to come the whole meeting will be canceled. arrange. Thus, it will be a waist of time to wait of all members to arrange a proper time. For Instance, when I was in high school, I was working with my group for Science project. One of my teem member was working after school for a part- time, so she did not have time to meet up with us every day. As a result we were late and we could not subment the project on time.

Second, working online together is much easier. Evidently, when you work with your teem online using e-mail, you will be able to work in any place and any time whenever you want and wherever you want. Hence you will finish your work faster. For example, I remember when I was in college,I worked on a computer project with my teem. Although that each one of us where from different city, we were able to make amazing project. Thanks to the e-mail and other communication applications.

To sum up, I firmly believe that it is more efficent to work on projects with your teem by using e-mail and any other remote communication tool. This is because it will save all teem members time, and it make communication and work much flixable.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...roup member where all of them are free. Because if a single member was not able to come...
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Suggestion: Arrange
...ome the whole meeting will be canceled. arrange. Thus, it will be a waist of time to wa...
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Suggestion:
...work with your teem online using e-mail, you will be able to work in any place an...
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...henever you want and wherever you want. Hence you will finish your work faster. For e...
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...will save all teem members time, and it make communication and work much flixable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, such as, as a result, first of all, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4625 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45216740864 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490625 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6011859977 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3333333333 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311275201555 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110286121216 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653222224081 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225431847976 0.150856017488 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470373355912 0.0645574589148 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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