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what you will choose work alone or with your classmates

Working in a project require hard effort and time, thus it could be hard to do all this alone. Personally, I would definitely select to work with my classmates in a group. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

First of all, it is more efficient to work within a team. Obviously, when you work with a group, you do not have to do all of the work by your self. Therefore, it will take less time and effort from you. My own experience is an excellent example of this. when I was In high school, my group and I worked on a Science project. The project required a lot of work and tasks. But, each one of us took a single task and work on it. As a result, we submited an amazing and perfect project in a short time.

Secondly, when you work with a group of your classmates, you will have to deal with different students with different experiences. Hence, this will assist you to expand your knowledge and improve your skills. For instance, when I was in college, I was working on a project for my programming class with my team.
Each member of the team is an expert of a certin language. I was C++ prgrammer and my classmate Sara was a HTML programer and finally Deema, who was a Java profesionsl programmer. By the end of the project I learned a lot from them. If i had worked alone, I would not think that my programming skills improved.

To sum up, I firmly believe that working on a project with your calssmates as a group is more effective. this is because it saves time and effort, and it makes you learn more. Thus, your academic level will improve.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i feel, as a result, first of all, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30693069307 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50965307338 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511551155116 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1611182934 48.9658058833 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.1428571429 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4285714286 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334969984906 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102422578383 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970555529339 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205757549479 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994923697207 0.0645574589148 154% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 11.7677419355 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 58.1214874552 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 10.9000537634 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i feel, as a result, first of all, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments