Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? When people solve problems as a group, they come up with better solution that if they were to try to solve the problem individually. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Two heads are better than one! this idiom can say everything about this question. but it is not true for every group. the members of group should be matchable persons. if someone in the group do not can match herself/himself to another members of group, all members will facing the problem because it is a teamwork. it can slow down the process of solving and in some cases maybe even stop the process and do not allow to achieve the answer. but generally I agree with this statement because of below statement:

First, imagine you have very very short time for solve a problem. so you get too much stress. and being alone can make worsen condition for you. if you have somebody beside yourself so you can control your stress level better.

Second, sometimes you should solve a problem with several aspect. so you need enough knowledge in some different fields to solve that problem. generally every person have proficiency in one field and it is rare to handle something like this kind of problems by only one person. a team with members those who have proficiency in different field can be a great idea in this case.

Third, when you are alone and the problem is complicated, you maybe get tired. but if you have somebodies beside yourself like a team, they can motivate you for keep going in the solving way.

At the end, based on above statements we can get conclusion that most of the time teamwork is better than work alone except when one or some members of team do not matchable or can not match themselves to another member.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, third, kind of, in some cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 275.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63636363636 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36922416426 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538181818182 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.3209751906 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6875 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249528342569 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905641994265 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638854623769 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142340778134 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453129192256 0.0645574589148 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 86.8835125448 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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