Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “When people succeed, it is entirely because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with their success.” Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.
Everyone has their own preferred learning style, and therefore it’s impossible to accommodate it all. Working hard plays a significant role in our life and improving personal skills particular is one of the most important elements to have a good life. I strongly agree that working so hard lead to success. I feel this way because of two reasons which I will explore in this essay.
First of all, life is changing quickly and people need to pursue goals to get the positively impact into their life. The drastically increase in population ratio makes the life easier than in the past to success. In modern society people live today, they can efficiently use technological devices to improve their skills, abilities, and knowledge. Talking about me as an example, about four years ago, I used to waste time hanging out with friends, sleep for more than ten hours a day, and be careless with losing any interest toward technology. Consequently, I failed vast of my classes at the university and had been two years behind my peers. However, my sister is the hard worker person in the entire family. She always seeks ways to improve her skills and abilities by using internet and recent studies to get a master degree in Physiology. As a result, she is the top ranking of her class for two years, besides, she get the opportunity to be a faculty member in one of the biggest universities in Texas. Without working hard, no one can achieve any goals.
Secondly, individual nowadays have to work hard to cope to the environment they lived in. Recent decade shows that the most successful people those who never give up and never let others exceed them. Talking about me as a company’s leader as an example, when I failed in my business management classes years ago, I decided to invest my time and energy to be a successful women. Consequently, I was working very hard many years to fix the issues happened in the past. I learned how to run a company and how to be a perfect co-worker at the same time. At the end, I got a promotion about the best young women who influenced other women to be hard worker. It could be I was lucky at some point but, that never mean it depend on the luck to achieve goals and prosperity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 925, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...f her class for two years, besides, she get the opportunity to be a faculty member ...
^^^
Line 5, column 377, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...t my time and energy to be a successful women. Consequently, I was working very hard ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 721, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'depends'?
Suggestion: depends
...y at some point but, that never mean it depend on the luck to achieve goals and prospe...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, i feel, talking about, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64141414141 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62568466834 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578282828283 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9100244153 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167753429359 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482964544243 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354996414047 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115123577384 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242807370074 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.