Essay topics:
It is better to spend the money of rich persons for which of charity organizations?
Health care
provide food
start the small business?
Helping other people is one of the most essential aspect all around the globe. People have to divide some funds for providing a health care to aid some charity organizations. However others, could spend their money by providing foods or begin running a small business. I strongly agree rich people have to give part of their money to promote the health care.
First and foremost, health care could impact poor individual’s life
Votes
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...care to aid some charity organizations. However others, could spend their money by prov...
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Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...could impact poor individual's life
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 15.1003584229 7% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.0286738351 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 43.0788530466 7% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 52.1666666667 15% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 366.0 1977.66487455 19% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 72.0 407.700716846 18% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.91295063024 4.48103885553 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69258240357 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 54.0 212.727598566 25% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.75 0.524837075471 143% => OK
syllable_count: 112.5 618.680645161 18% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.6003584229 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 8.91291198206 48.9658058833 18% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.2 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176401882535 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852236263899 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535576118052 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112476491205 0.150856017488 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677990707564 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 15.0 86.8835125448 17% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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