Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Young people nowadays are credited more than they can handle, both as the future of the world and the benchmark of social morals.they are overwhelmed by huge expectations to engage in numerous tasks from their parents and society as a whole.Therefore, time is almost never enough for them. helping the communities, among all the things, is no exception. To begin with, time is indeed far from sufficient for youth to engage in this kind of activities. The youth today are faced with an amount of pressure unseen by and previous generations. From the primary school children to the working population, it is the learning and working that justifies their full life, especially in countries that prioritizes academic improvement.this is an idea that is instilled in their mind and ingrained with each passing day. Just take the young people around me for example. The competition for good schools, good internships and good jobs deprives those young people of spare time and energy. Besides, teachers in school and parents at home constantly give them an impression that an outstanding performance outweighs anything else and only in excelling others in academic study can they embrace a bright future and promising career. No wonder the importance of study dies hard and naturally other activities, ranging from helping the lonely aged to cleaning the road, are considered a distraction from their major task. In this case, time has been devoted to academic study, leaving no chance for the community activities. At a deeper level, the concept or awareness of devotion may be lacking in the young's mind. Brought up and considered as the prince or princess of their family, young people have already taken it for granted that contribution, either to their little family or the community, is not a necessity in their life. this is partly because the parents misinterpret it in a way that children can get whatever they demand without consideration of others, let alone some return to the world they live in. Also the education system and the society plays no favorable role in molding a contributing atmosphere. My friend, Jerry, is a typical example. Jerry is the only child in his family and is spoiled by his parents. Rarely does Jerry do the household chores like cooking and cleaning, and he will not even appear in the dinning room until the meal is ready. Under such a circumstance, Jerry has no idea about doing others’ favor in the community. even worse is that Jerry is negatively influenced by the news that someone who helped an injured old lady was treated as the one hurting this lady. such kind of news keeps Jerry away from the idea of helping strangers in his life. In conclusion, young people do not give enough time to helping their communities as a result of the limited time and the lack of awareness.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 90
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 90
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... some return to the world they live in. Also the education system and the society pl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2344.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 477.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91404612159 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74472082987 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545073375262 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 740.7 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.2365617266 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.619047619 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207816037503 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588798877905 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768668448925 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207816037503 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 86.8835125448 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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