Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

It is critically important that how young people spend their time, because it would affect their adult life. Personally, I believe the fact that teenagers do not allocate time for social work activities, is not something far fudged. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will elaborate on them in following paragraphs.
To begin with, most parents desire what is the best for their children, which makes them to plan restrict daily programs for them. Their notion is that the children cannot decide what is the most efficient way of using their spare time, due to lack of life experience, parents should take over and augment the quality of using their time. Therefore, parents put young ones in a path, which goes through different classes and extracurricular activities. As a result, there is limited time for students to spend on giving a hand to their community. For instance, my nephew is a brilliant, yet playful fifteen-years-old boy. My sister believes that if she does not help her son, he would waste his free time playing around with his friends. So, by forming a hectic schedule for him, the boy is busy all week, with no extra free time. Although he is inclined to join a tutoring club in his school, he is unable to afford the time.
Furthermore, many technological advances have made social affairs more regulated and automatic, which leads to implementing procedures that do not rely on humans to be done. Many young people had to literary join various groups for charity purposes in the past, before the prevalence of the internet. If teenagers wanted to raise a fund for a good reason, they had to go house-by-house, convincing people to donate money for a specific benevolent matter. Nowadays, there are various websites and mobile applications for these social movements. Such processes do not need a lot of time and effort to be done. Consequently, the young people’s involvement in the society is decreasing these days.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that youngsters’ participation in social activities is not as high as there was before. This because most of them have a lot on their plate these days, and technological growth diminishes their presence less required than before.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eir presence less required than before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93582887701 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86004283282 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585561497326 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4342482352 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1578947368 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6842105263 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205475832873 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593317283946 0.076458572812 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419391844033 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115081259836 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467765393787 0.0645574589148 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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