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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people enjoy life more than older people do.

The answer to that question depends on the country people live in. For example, if we consider Denmark and Russia, we will have different answers in the end. Retirement in Denmark is well-paid and old people can enjoy life on the same level with younger ones. However, in poor countries like Russia, all layers of society can have major problems, which can be an obstacle for a good life. Even though, poor people can enjoy life too, but the way the pleasure is gained will be different.

First and foremost, if we take young adults, in general, they tend to enjoy life more, because they have better opportunities. They have well-paid jobs, so they obviously have more money than retirees. Money can be spent on travels and buying new products, which often make people temporarily happier. While travelling, they have more stamina and access to dangerous activities. Moreover, they aren't commonly afraid of flights and have a greater variability in choosing the way to travel. One more factor to consider, is that a great deal of young adults are trying to live in big cities with more opportunities to spend time with pleasure. When old people, conversely, prefer living in rural areas.

Nevertheless, rich retirees can also live their remaining life out. They have more time than working people, which they can spend on the activities they never tried before. For instance, they can do gardening or try themselves in creating art object. They can also spend time with their grandchildren, telling various stories and sharing old memory with them. My grandmother personally enjoys doing it every now and then. Thereby I think that even if old people tend to have less money, they can obtain pleasure from ordinary things. Last but not least, people with a small amount of time left, value life more. Consequently, they are doing only things they utterly like and enjoy, whithout considering other's opinion and worring about the career.

To sum up, in my opinion, both young people and elders can enjoy life equally. The main thing that can distinguish is the way of spending spare time and things people enjoy. Humans change with time, as their preferences and minds change. But, the enjoyment received from life remains in any age.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...to dangerous activities. Moreover, they arent commonly afraid of flights and have a g...
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Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
... grandmother personally enjoys doing it every now and then. Thereby I think that even if old peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, conversely, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in general, in my opinion, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95225464191 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45684921041 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575596816976 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5897114742 48.9658058833 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.7916666667 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7083333333 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257176894365 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830301035501 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058165652788 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173787827637 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264108161381 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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