Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Young people have an influential and fabulous leverage on our daily life. It is utterly important to appreciate their indleible impact on our society. Although some people hold the viewpoint that teenagers have no effect on our community. Others may hold a different intellect and disagree with this notion. My personal experience and actual observation of life had led me to agree with the idea that youth in our present days have momentous opinion on our society. In the following essay, I shall delve into most outstanding reasons.
First and foremost, most of the young people communicate through social media and they have a powerfull voice to effect others. Now a days, those juvenile are more self confidence and have their own personality that they could lead a revolution. For instance, the recent peacful prosters that act against the Iraqi government are led by the young people. They decided to change the bad situaton of their country and inforce the government to provide more essential services to their country.Indeed, their voice so stron that the government start provide some jobs for people and also enhance other services and promices to work more hard to amelirate each segments in the society.
In addition, most of the yougesters are occupy certain jobs and volunteer in certain organization to enhance and flourish their society. Thyey try to make changes for bette, developed society. For example, the people who volunteer in red croos most of them are teenagers, they dedicate their efforts to help people in needs and gets a decent living situation for them. They help in huricans disaster and give from their time and efforts to go to a reigon in danger to support publics in these area.
To sum up, judging what I have mentioned before, taking all the factors into account, I would reinforce my idea that adolscsnt today have a tremendous notion in our society for their stron personality to make changes in the community and their efforts to help others by work and volunteer in certain social, non profite organization.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in addition, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04385964912 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63077473092 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546783625731 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.0837328643 48.9658058833 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122974989147 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463684544116 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323202559479 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749542247092 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437152448839 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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