do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
all high school students should be required to have three years of studying a foreign language.
use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Nowadays the communications are raised and spread the condition of living is changed. Everything is not like before, learning another languages is so necessary for everything. Especially learning English language for those countries that their first language is not English. I will try to examine below the specific reasons for illustrating my opinion.
These days there is no boundary for learning. A student may be accepted in a university in another country and need to learn the language of that area. For example; in my country, Iran, our first language and maternal language is Persian while if I want to apply for another universities in Canada and U.S.A, I’m supposed to know English very well because it’s the first and formal language in these countries and moreover it is the first international language.
Furthermore, for people who their job is about trade and business especially in the whole world, it is so vital to know English at least, or they may be needed to know French or other common languages that are in 5 top languages rate in the global. For speaking, writing and making connections with others in foreign countries, the need of knowing another language is feeling.
Apart the points I made above, living in different areas and maybe migration to another continent or country need to know their language. The basic necessity for being in society and taking participant in the social environments, is talking to others to transport our opinions and on the contrary understanding their speeches and viewpoints. A simple example is that for buying the primary needs from supermarket we have to know the language of that area. For speaking to salesperson, explaining what we want all we need is language.
To sum up, for the points that were stated above learning another languages is a good guarantee for the future of the students, for their job, education and finally their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, at least, for example, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07547169811 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80827998146 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531446540881 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.4637214368 48.9658058833 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.285714286 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0641491301064 0.236089414692 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0312608548609 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313254278114 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0386098735914 0.150856017488 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256568405185 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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