Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People have lots of relationship during their lives.At schools, at work , in family we have share lots of things with other people.We can build either good connection or not.The way our relationship is up to us.It can contain good values or it can include bad experiences.Altough there are many consideration in a relationship I agree that the most important consideration in any relationship is telling the truth because of some reasons such as to be trusted by others,to be respected by others and to be loved by others.
First of all, we always need someone to trust.It is the main physiological necessity of human being.As we all know when a baby born, it feels relaxed only near its mother in the first weeks because it trust his mother and knows that to be feed and saved by its mother. Furthermore, when we go to school we have teachers and friends, and we try to connect with them and try to trust them.So to have confidence with others like family members or friends , teachers , telling the truth must be the first rule to have a good relationship.
On the other hand respect is also an important concept.It is gained by the attitude of us to other people.For example ; If you lie your friend about anything, and he learnt you lied to him, he never trust and respect you.And he will be reluctant to keep up the relation with you.In addition to this you will have a negative effects in others mind even you try to fix this.
Lastly,people tend to love who always tells the truth For instance,you have some bad thoughts with some of your friends.However, you behave very well while you are together with them. But when they go you gossip about them.It causes you to be and unreliable person and you are not loved by others.Instead of this, you can act how you feel.
In conclusion,to have a good relationship must include trust,respect and love.The choice of having these concepts ultimately comes down to one’s personel preferences.If you want to have all these values, you always tell the truth in any of your relationship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73314606742 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91433107544 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544943820225 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.1344086022 248% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.254642653 48.9658058833 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 240.714285714 100.406767564 240% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.8571428571 20.6045352989 247% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.4285714286 5.45110844103 448% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.5376344086 704% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236091824565 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120740715617 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581975259486 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141248902896 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045960446747 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.3 11.7677419355 223% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 37.65 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.4 10.1575268817 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.04 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 10.002688172 295% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.0537634409 219% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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