Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to
plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When a person talks about modern life, the very first things come to mind are technology advancement, healthcare issue, and the most famous one, lack of time. Although people have consensus on the fact that it is not necessary to neither have nor make a plan for each stage of life regarding to subjects which have been introduced above, since life experience could be achieved basically via try and error, there is controversy among them whether it is essential for them particularly young one in order to have the ability to plan and organize.
To begin with, it should be mentioned that juveniles are dealing with a technologic world which is one of the most fundamental characteristic of modern life and has its own advantages and disadvantages. Nowadays, people in their twenties and thirties have less time to spend on beneficial activities like sitting with family members and talking with them, since they are busy with their social network accounts like FaceBook or Instagram. Accordingly, it seems that lack of the ability to schedule their time efficiently would bring them trouble with their social life tremendously. Furthermore, modern life complexity in many aspects needs young people to communicate with each other for making friends and finding life companions to solve the serious problems of modern life.
The second point is that if the juveniles suffer from the lack of enough time in order to investigate various aspects of their life, they must be able to attain the ability of being organized and making plan wisely. In this manner, they would be able to take advantage of their limited time, which has been the most precious treasure of human being ever by the way, as effective as possible. For instance a young boy who is always sitting in front of his laptop, trying to attract followers to like his photos, is doing nothing but destroying his future, ridiculously. After all, the fact that he will play a role in the future is unavoidable. Thus, why not to get prepared for this unpredictable sophisticated life intelligently rather than waste talent.
Finally, it must be maintained that living modern life is not as healthier as before. The hustle and bustle of modern life has deprived young people of healthy life. For instance, university students who constitute significant portion of young societies not only stare to their cell phone screen for many long hours without doing any physical activity, but also eat non-healthy foods or drink alcoholic drinks in bars. Due to these disastrous fact which has been brought with modern life, they must make plan for themselves in order to improve their health conditions. This is not feasible without having an accurate plan for living a modern life.
In conclusion, due to the reasons mentioned above in details, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize in order to deal with the complexity of modern life, well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 393, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...erience could be achieved basically via try and error, there is controversy among them ...
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Line 4, column 76, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... living modern life is not as healthier as before. The hustle and bustle of modern...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, regarding, second, so, thus, well, after all, for instance, in conclusion, by the way, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2443.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 490.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98571428571 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70488508055 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66741876455 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518367346939 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 767.7 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.6324079718 48.9658058833 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.705882353 100.406767564 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8235294118 20.6045352989 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23529411765 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286545241387 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102892184945 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772747751541 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193756820116 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722267760247 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 11.7677419355 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.247311828 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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