Is there someone who never faced a problem, probably not. Although, the attempt how people solve their problems are different. In this essay, it will be discussed either creative or structured approaches generate the better solution. Of course, there is not a kings way to reach a suitable solution and you have to decide which approach fits best. Personally, I prefer carefully planned attempts to solve a problem because of the following reasons.
First, to solve a problem you have to know what exactly the problem is. Therefore, is is crucial to analyze if your observation is the cause or just an effect of the main problem. Only if you identify the root cause it is worthy to think about ways to overcome it. At this point, we already use the analytic or planned way to solve a problem and it provides important information about the main obstacle you are facing with and gives first hints to choose a suitable way to get solution. Undoubtedly, this attempt is time consuming even before you get on the main point, on the other hand, it might offers you already a glimpse of the solution.
Second, creativity is a very useful gift of mankind. However, creative attempts often fail. Furthermore, depending on how often you fail, it can be very time consuming until you find a suitable solution. In consequence, it not only needs imaginative skills, moreover, patience is needed. At the point you got a solution, you might not know why you had to face this situation. Therefore, it is very likely that it will happen again and annoys you. Nevertheless, i could have been a unique event and you will never again think about.
To conclude, based on my personal background I prefer the planned attempt to save problems. Although, sometimes the very best planning is not satisfying, then you will need unconventional and creative approaches.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ho never faced a problem, probably not. Although, the attempt how people solve their pro...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: is
...what exactly the problem is. Therefore, is is crucial to analyze if your observation ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...pen again and annoys you. Nevertheless, i could have been a unique event and you ...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...hough, sometimes the very best planning is not satisfying, then you will need unconventional and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, then, therefore, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87619047619 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72480834168 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546031746032 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9151454534 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8421052632 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5789473684 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209132317777 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064307791186 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344212289311 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132234782843 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263614060099 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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