Humans have always been bond to animals in various ways. Our forefathers looked at animals as a meal, by the time, we domesticated some species as continuous nutrition source. Later on, some species were domesticated for other applications as protection or support on working tasks. Nowadays, there is no longer a need of a cats hunting skills or the dogs protection and we keep them, among others, as pets. As a consequence, pet supplements and healthcare became a considerable part of our economy. Furthermore, may people spend a lot of money for their pets and it is probably true that they often spend too much money which could be used in better ways. Therefore, I agree with this statement and cause this on the following reasons.
To begin with, lets have a look at dogs. There are numerous different kinds of dogs an all of them were breaded for special purposes and behind every dog stays its forefather; the wolf. Nevertheless dogs have lost most of they dangerous characteristics and became the best friend of men. On the other hand, dogs are accustomed to survive in wilderness, they do not need clothes, houses or even a bank account. Despite these facts, there are winter jackets available for dogs. Moreover, some of them are made by designers or covered with sprinkling stones, which makes them quite expensive. There are really owner who are willing to wrap their dogs in dolce&cabana jackets, even if the dog himself does not recognize that.
Second, animal health care has become a huge market, almost as extensive as human health care. Naturally, pets sometimes become ill and need our help. However, animals can not speak and we have to guess what they need or what they want. A veterinary always wants to save lives, as human doctors do. Whereas humans can disagree with a cure, a pet has to accept what the owner decides. Sometimes, I think, people try to save a live whereas it only enlarges the torture of the animal.
In a nutshell, there are various ways to spend money for pets. Undoubtedly, some money is worth it and the owner benefits as well as the pet. On the other hand, there are just a lot of useless items or cures for animals which are not worth it. As a result, there could be better uses for this money, depends on what 'better' means.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 352, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'dogs'' or 'dog's'?
Suggestion: dogs'; dog's
... a need of a cats hunting skills or the dogs protection and we keep them, among othe...
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Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'numerous'.
Suggestion: numerous
...th, lets have a look at dogs. There are numerous different kinds of dogs an all of them were bread...
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Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...ery dog stays its forefather; the wolf. Nevertheless dogs have lost most of they dangerous c...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[4]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to surviving'.
Suggestion: accustomed to surviving
...end of men. On the other hand, dogs are accustomed to survive in wilderness, they do not need clothes...
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Line 3, column 608, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'owners'?
Suggestion: owners
... them quite expensive. There are really owner who are willing to wrap their dogs in d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, really, second, so, therefore, well, whereas, as to, i think, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 400.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7075 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55313410341 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9493991014 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.4583333333 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253523838261 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661536577506 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710834132768 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156255406971 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857361414865 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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