Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Throughout history, in all civilized societies, selecting a job engendered copious controversies among people. Some people may hold the view that it is necessary to select a secure job. However, some other may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that people should wait and choose an appealing job. As far as I am concerned, people should take a satisfying job because not only can they enjoy their life, but also they can progress in their life.
The first reason worth mentioning is that people can enjoy their life by choosing a pleasing. Nowadays every person needs to enjoy his life because life moving very fast and it is boring. Moreover, a person who choose a job that he like, spend all his time in his work to finish it without any mistake. It is proven that if a person do not like his job, he tries to do it very fast and this leads to error and fatal in the job. So, by taking a satisfying job you make a right decision in your life. Also, when you perform a job that you like it gives you energy to work harder. For example, a person that are responsible for a job that he like, try really hard to finish it correctly and also he never get tired. after finishing his work when he arrive home he still have a lot off energy and this good for her and he really enjoy her life.
A further more subtle point is that it helps people to make progress in their life. With advancement in the technology, become successful is really hard because everything changes very fast and you have to adopt yourself with it. To illustrate, people who select a job that they like the can progress in their life because they advocate their time for it. For instance, when an engineer have a problem and cannot find a way to solve it, he study an search for a solution and by this way he increase his knowledge and this can help him in his life and. Also if technology change his job, he try to understand it and adopt himself to new situation.
To make a long story short, based on the aforementioned argument, due to make progress in life and enjoying life, people prefer to choose a more interesting job. Consequently, it is highly recommended that between secure and interesting job, people choose interesting job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 702, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
...o finish it correctly and also he never get tired. after finishing his work when he...
^^^
Line 2, column 713, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
... correctly and also he never get tired. after finishing his work when he arrive home ...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 746, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'arrives'.
Suggestion: arrives
...tired. after finishing his work when he arrive home he still have a lot off energy and...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 767, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...g his work when he arrive home he still have a lot off energy and this good for her ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 825, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'enjoys'.
Suggestion: enjoys
...rgy and this good for her and he really enjoy her life. A further more subtle point ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'studies'.
Suggestion: studies
...m and cannot find a way to solve it, he study an search for a solution and by this wa...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 446, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...cannot find a way to solve it, he study an search for a solution and by this way h...
^^
Line 3, column 490, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'increases'.
Suggestion: increases
...earch for a solution and by this way he increase his knowledge and this can help him in ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 552, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... and this can help him in his life and. Also if technology change his job, he try to...
^^^^
Line 3, column 590, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tries'.
Suggestion: tries
.... Also if technology change his job, he try to understand it and adopt himself to n...
^^^
Line 4, column 256, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to interest'.
Suggestion: to interest
...cure and interesting job, people choose interesting job.
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, still, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47901234568 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47883772933 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454320987654 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3573806074 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4736842105 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3157894737 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256498432423 0.236089414692 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966901315084 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052898552934 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17307451373 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297000598364 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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