Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
it is the nature of the people who is searching for the right opportunity for them. some waits until what they want to get but, some thinks it is better to grab the opportunity whenever you get it as they always contemplate that time and tide wait for nobody and wise to snap the job for the safe zone. However, I believe in waiting unless the right opportunity because it makes you determine to achieve your goal and maintain passion and personality what you have desire to be.
To begin with, waiting for right opportunity keep away people for compromising with their career. it encourage the people in the fact that "Your destination will be the same but only time need to be arrived". people ended up what iis their aspiration but, not ended up in the low profile life. For instance, after graduation my lots of friends pursued the easier path by choosing the low profile job. I had that option but i believe in myself and waited for the right opportunity. I had suffered the duration of the suffering and the success but last I got what I wanted and gives me ultimate satisfaction. Although my friends being happy by selecting safe zone but later they felt remorse on their decision. that's why some time passion and dtermination makes people in good shape in their future.
Secondly, by pursuing the near next easy job, people lost their eagerness to achieve their final goal. Comfort and luxury and absence of determination might cause them to stay away the final goal once they wish to have. Consequently, they may stuck in the zone where they may not pushed themselves upward. so, big decison and inetrest should be build inside the people for the better future.
Thirdly, taking the low profile job may abstain the people for developing right personality. they may have to adopt in the lower job which was way below than their personality. Learning opportunities of big things also gone with their loose determination o pursue right job. On the other hand, people who wait and get the job might have different spirit. they moves to the direction of perfection. Simililarly, their courage to deal with trouble will be increased and in few spate of time, their whole course of life may changed from the naive to impeccable person. In this way, passion and hardwork may lift the life of the person and should always have faith in it.
In conclsuion, easy and quick job may satisfy person for shoet time but, most of the time it may back fire the person who have immesne capacity but lose faith in himself. so for the betterment of the life, passion, hardwork and personal faith are necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2184.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77899343545 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52164805706 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507658643326 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1999263743 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0416666667 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.29166666667 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304320417452 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093962224395 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630819395195 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181481087761 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074525151059 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.