People take diverse views toward choosing career paths or jobs while trying to confirm a secure and prosperous future. A controversial question is often raised regarding this issue is whether it was easier in the past to set a career path and move in that direction. People of different generation might have conflicting views on that topic. As far as I am concerned, I totally agree with the statement that it is much more difficult to choose a career nowadays. To support my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a brief summary with reasons and examples.
First of all, nowadays field of career is very diverse and people have to choose from numerous options. Recent discoveries and research break down a subject to smaller parts which ultimately give rise to another career path. Hence, it is becoming more and more tough to take decision about topic that should be chosen for a secured future. For instance, consider a student of computer science who is planning to pursue higher degree on some topic related to his domain. In the past, there were a few topics under that domain like operating system, algorithm, software engineering etc. However, with the development of technology, research is now conducted on numerous topic in this domain like machine learning, data science, cryptography. Therefore, a student need to identify his strength and interest and choose accordingly.
In addition, career or job field is changing rapidly, and sometimes it is so unstable and insecured that it would be very tough to predict about chance of being successful. New technology or change in government policy or funding on new research might some critical factor that diminishes other career path. For example, when I was a undergraduate student, EEE was the most demanding domain in engineering sector and I chose to pursue my career in that domain. But after some years, job fields in that domain became saturated and after completion of my undergraduate degree, it was hard to get opportunity in limited number of job sectors. This dramatic change happened much faster then previous and therefore it is tough to identify that some field would survive well in future.
Finally, as people are now more focused on career from early age and many students plan to pursue higher degree to make future more secured, now there is much more competition in every sector. It is known that, only some already established university or institution can provide advance research opportunities, although number of students is increasing day by day. Therefore, it becomes harder for a student and need to really proof himself to get funding for research work or to be employed in a company.
To sum up, on the basis of examples that were mentioned above, it is clear that now it is harder to identify career path compared to the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to career'
Suggestion: to career
...ople take diverse views toward choosing career paths or jobs while trying to confirm a...
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Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...er career path. For example, when I was a undergraduate student, EEE was the most...
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Line 5, column 676, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'faster than'?
Suggestion: faster than
...ors. This dramatic change happened much faster then previous and therefore it is tough to i...
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Line 5, column 683, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...is dramatic change happened much faster then previous and therefore it is tough to i...
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Line 5, column 770, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...tify that some field would survive well in future. Finally, as people are now more foc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, finally, first, hence, however, if, really, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2369.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 474.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99789029536 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71438980538 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527426160338 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 755.1 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4027471837 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.80952381 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09523809524 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165240629829 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490738723912 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413376782582 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976768372939 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621917009213 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.