Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them, today young people are better able to make decision for their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your response.
Gone are the days when people were highly attached to their parents. From my vantage point, people now are more reliable on themselves. Some conducive factors are advent of Internet, better economic chances and proliferation of population and connections.
First and for most, this new-born phenomenon called "Internet" has led people to find their own path in life solitarily. People today, via Internet are able and entitled to ask hundreds of thousands questions with respect to their decisions. Their inquires may range from very basic questions like "what is the best paying job in my area?" to very specific kinds such as "Instruction for running their own business". Nevertheless parents’ advice may be more accurate and helpful for their offspring, no one can compete to those ever-running search engines in internet. For instance, a person in his/her 18 years of age can easily find his/her concerns' solution about his/her future life by just couple of clicks instead of looking for his/her responses in his/her parents advice. People now are more compatible of making decisions by internet comparing to past.
Similarly, Economic opportunities, these days help people in several ways to deciding for their own life separately. For example, wide range of rent prices for housing, different types of expenses for cars will help juvenile in their ways to make their decisions more independently. That is to say, some teenagers may admit their parents’ advice for their future life style compulsively. Some parents may make their children to listen and employ what they want them to do without considering their youngsters’ taste or decision. Nowadays, one can easily find a reasonable car price or a cheap studio to share with a roommate in order to overlook his/her parent forcing demands and illogical abuse. In past, people were troubled with not having such opportunities. Thus people were more reliable on parents in case of making even their personal decisions.
Last but not least, vast connection between people is an undeniable fact. They are better prone to brilliant mindsets. They are apt to well organized and rational ideas of running life more than ever before. By having ample connection in social life basis such as our friends, our instructors in school and so forth, we are now able to decide pursue whoever we like advice. In that way, not only our parents cannot dictate us, but we are more inclined to revise our decision by different ideas and eventually decide what works the best for us.
In conclusion, we seem more independent individuals in comparison to our ancestors. Internet, wide range of financial chances and proliferation of connections among people are some factors which by no means can be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Line 2, column 447, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
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Line 3, column 708, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
...nt forcing demands and illogical abuse. In past, people were troubled with not having s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, nevertheless, similarly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, with respect to, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2348.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25279642058 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96258028115 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545861297539 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 741.6 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8465141328 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.086956522 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4347826087 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52173913043 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313188335932 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959600612414 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665184308911 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155160572102 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109331427754 0.0645574589148 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 86.8835125448 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.