Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects to to specialize in one specific subject.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today's world is more developed in technology and people required deep and broad knowledge. Knowledge pursues a person a better career in the future. However, some people think that for better knowledge people should specialize in a specific field and others think that people need a broad knowledge of the various field. Not surprisingly, the number of controversies over this issue is overwhelming. Among this controversy, I prefer the first one. I will provide several elaborations for holding this aspect.
First and foremost, deep and particular knowledge is essential to get a better job. By focusing on a single field people can concentrate enough to achieve a better skill on a specific subject. If people observe different scholar in the world it is hard to find that a single scholar holding all knowledge on the various subject except one or two. There is a limitation on human beings. For instance, one of my friend who is very interested in the field of computer science when he was a sophomore in college. So, he broadens his knowledge on a various computer program like Java, HTML, object-oriented program and also in the database. As a result, before graduation, he was adept in those specific subject. Moreover, his academic result is not good like me but still, he is more skilful than me because for specific concentration on a field.
Furthermore, when student studying in the various subject they often distract from the basic knowledge on those subject. Sometimes it is difficult for them to make connections with those subject because of the broad explanation of the various field. For particular, when I was an undergraduate student I often confused with this broad knowledge and sometimes it was difficult for me to find why did I need to study this course, why did this course add in my field etc. As an engineering student, I always thought that Why I need to study accounting, sociology, management. Moreover, after passing those course I never remember those subject and not able to explain any of the topics. Personally I believe that it is a total waste of time and money. Hence, I think for achieve a relevant knowledge student should stay
concentrate on a specific field.
To recapitulate, broad knowledge is necessary because today's world is more diverse and adapt to the new generation broad mindset is essential. But, it is impossible for people to achieve broad knowledge of the different field and I realized that people should only focus on a particular field for prosperous future.
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Concentrate
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, for instance, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2117.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01658767773 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89530406896 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454976303318 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 663.3 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6953277081 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0434782609 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.347826087 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.60869565217 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196865028604 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613236286001 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049203952817 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121308713572 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316834233132 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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