Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to have a job that you enjoy to do rather than a job with high income.
Give reasons and details to support your answer.
Many people think finance is the most important element to have a good life. Therefore, a lot of people willing to dismiss their family, friends, and even current health to get a job with high salary. From my point of view, I agree with the notion because satisfaction in a job, family and being in a good health is much important than having a high salary job due to many reasons I will explain in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, spend an enjoyable time in a job is more important than the high salary people receive. These days, workers spending eight hours or more a day. That means, workers facing their job most of the time so, if they are not satisfied about their jobs it will lead to a hug problem. Consequently, they won’t be able to raise their fundamental knowledge, critical thinking and intellectual capacity because there is no time to spend to learn more skills and talents. For instance, my brother got accepted in
Additionally, employees they don’t have enough time to be with their families and friends if they do care about high wage having a boring job day after day will end-up with un-healthy life style
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, therefore, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 1977.66487455 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 202.0 407.700716846 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75742574257 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56863914708 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 212.727598566 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60396039604 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 618.680645161 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.8330036912 48.9658058833 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.125 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244517036956 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10751488923 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881569435347 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174010945818 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471349419164 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 86.8835125448 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.