Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Working is necessary to earn our basic needs but more important is to enjoy while performing it. Jobs are very stressful sometimes that most people do not get time for themselves. Some enjoy working the entire week whereas I prefer to work for lesser days in a week for the reasons which I will explore in the following passages.
To begin with, shorter working days give more time to spend with family and children. Working full time can be hectic and it could create problems at home for not able to deliver time that kids and family deserve. On off days, people could go to parks, museums or watch movies and spend some quality time with loved ones. Hence, it maintains the relationship with love and caring for each other. for example, my husband these days is working shorter hours, we could give more time to ourselves, our children and friends. We could reunite with friends after a long gap of three years.I am happy that we got our social life back.
Furthermore, shorter working hours could benefit people's health. They could spend more time in gyms, working out or doing exercises at home. it is healthy to both mind and body. Working for a full time could impede mind growth as works are stressful most of the time. For instance, just after college, I started working full-time for two years. And in those, years I could rarely give time to myself, I was so restless and my mind was exhausted all the time. Thus, I decided to quit my job and I took a job with shorter working days, now I feel fresh and I can do better on jobs too. This example demonstrates effectiveness in your mind and body.
in conclusion, I agree with the statement that lesser worker hours are better than full-time jobs because it gives more time for our family and friends, and because it is healthy to mind and body.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 326.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5736196319 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28307424707 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524539877301 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8931885969 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8333333333 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286906905587 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102781253898 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753630100162 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202621234287 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584099144733 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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