Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
To most of us, friends are just like our family. They are the ones who are always by your side through all of your ups and downs. Having old good friends is the precious gift that you can never let go. In my point of view, we should keep old friends instead of making new ones. There are two main reasons for why i stand my position: they understand us the most and it is not easy to find new ones.
To begin with, no one can understand us better than old friends. They have been with us through everything. They are the shoulder for us to cry on whenever we meet with failures. On the other hand, they are also the first people we share our happiness with. As a matter of fact, long-time friends know our secret than everyone else, even our parents. For exaple, there are strict parents that won't let their children do anything but studying, therefore, friends are the ones that those children can count on for advises on their love life, especially if they are teenagers. Long-time friends willingly hide all of your secrets, which is a true sign of loyalty, so they are worth keeping.
Moreover, in this society nowadays, it is not an easy task finding new friends who always stay true to you. Everything has changed a lot. People are not as completely honest with each other as they were before. There have been those kinds of people who make friend with others, who have higher social positions and have lots of money such as their bosses, just to take advantage of them. They think that if they are close to them they will be more likely to get promoted or to get a raise. Thus, new friends can be so deceitful that it is much better to stick with our old friends than to be on the lookout for new ones. Old friends have been with us from the beginning, since we have nothing but our bare hands. Those are our real friends, even though there aren't many of them.
Owing to all of the reasons mentioned above, i personally think that we should keep old friends. Old friends can be considered as our treasure. We ought to keep this treasure as long as we can. Of course we can make new friends too, but we have to choose wisely as well as we make sure that we don't leave our old friends.
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Discourse Markers used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.183932346723 0.229887763892 80% => OK
Verbs: 0.162790697674 0.158761421928 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0887949260042 0.0866891130778 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0655391120507 0.046263068375 142% => OK
Pronouns: 0.112050739958 0.0685040099705 164% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126849894292 0.118717715034 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0274841437632 0.0351676179071 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.1630234266 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0295983086681 0.0309702414327 96% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0528541226216 0.0887237588012 60% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0232558139535 0.0209618222197 111% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.014799154334 0.0139019557991 106% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2300.0 2387.08602151 96% => OK
No of words: 415.0 408.028673835 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5421686747 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.238554216867 0.338922669872 70% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.173493975904 0.251872472559 69% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.103614457831 0.174417080927 59% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0626506024096 0.112833075102 56% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1630234266 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489156626506 0.524397521467 93% => OK
Word variations: 53.7780564226 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 17.2916666667 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1342985144 48.84282405 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8333333333 120.699889404 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2916666667 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.644075263715 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 34.641064257 45.7405998639 76% => OK
Elegance: 0.993788819876 1.45489161554 68% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327319823906 0.300154397459 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116799649574 0.103427244359 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0995559317414 0.0752933317313 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.434200701835 0.497263757937 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.143485794784 0.151897553556 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115421468574 0.114077575197 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723586229105 0.0781384742642 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.402796004969 0.336927656856 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0387283483205 0.067059652881 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233202142053 0.210909579961 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490479217689 0.0618886996521 79% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8870967742 151% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 17.0 8.42114695341 202% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
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Rates: 83 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 25 Out of 30