Leaders in all communities have a very influential character. Although some believe these characteristic has genetic base ,others claim they could be learned and are acquired. I agree with the latter opinion and think leadership could be learnt by leaders due to science and evidence behind it.
First of all, there are lots of classes and lessons available for leaders to help them how to be influential and by science and psychology development the mystery behind every thing is revealed. In the past leaders may have some abilities that differentiate them from others but scientists nowadays found that characteristic. Therefore, now there are lots of scientific ways to improve or increase innate characteristic to be close to the ideal one which is essential for leaders. People can improve their speaking skills,their communication skills and also how to be more influential.
Moreover, leaders are very persistant and responsible which also be learnt and therefore is acquired .For example,we can see most of the first babies in the family are very independent and on their own foot in contrast to the younger kids in the families which most of the time are dependent. This show us that parent attitude and behavior can change the kids personality. Therefore, more responsibilities brings more independence and success. So it is not a dream to raise a person for being the leader. In the past by this way most of the dynasty was delivered to the next generation.
Lastly, there are lots of practices and lessons in school to help the people to learn this skills for leadership and the one who are interested can empower themselves to this characteristic. If it was an inborn skill there would be no such lessons available.
In conclusion, however a person with in born characteristic of leadership could reach to the goal of leadership much easier, without that is also possible but needs more practice and preparation.Leadership nowadays has a lot of class preparations which means it is acquired and could be learnt.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08383233533 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1437753059 2.67179642975 118% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52994011976 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.0716990616 48.9658058833 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.2 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153412663759 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529692601974 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395478662827 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925375638302 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332284143978 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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