Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

It is common to see outstanding leaders that lead the whole team successfully and they are always the brightest star among the crowd. It seems that it is natural for them to do so, and people cannot become a leader by learning. However, it is nothing more than a stereotype. In fact, leadership can be taught by learning.

No one knows how to lead others when they are born. To be more specific, babies have to imitate parents' action to learn how to do something. If they become good leaders in the future, they may be influenced by their parents with leadership or people around them. Although they become a good leader without actually receiving education of being a leader, they have already learned it by others in the past.

People can become an excellent leader after learning how to lead a group of people. Leading skill can be practiced just like any other skill. For example, people will know how to express their opinion more clearly to others from practicing giving speeches and taking lessons about expressing. They can also learn from a good leader by observing what they do to make an influence. Once they know the tips of being a good leader, they can become a good leader, too.

Some people complain that they cannot become a leader because they lack leadership, which cannot get by learning, for they want to find an excuse for not practicing being a leader. It is easier to blame on other reasons than actually put an effort to learn since the process of achieving dream is tedious and hard. People usually give up during the difficult process. Not to mention, some even don't give it a try.

Practicing and learning can help people become an outstanding leader.

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Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, may, so, for example, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73648648649 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42050378399 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516891891892 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4844124858 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8888888889 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164322160068 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621816115946 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423800562369 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10928446843 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247234359963 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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