Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
The question of the pompt is that whether the life is esier and more comfortable than it was in the past or not. Some people beleive that the life in the past was much more easier than it was today. Others hold the opesit opinion. In my view, due to cutting-edge technology, people lifes are more easier and comfortable that it was before. The besis of my view is descripe in the following essay.
Transportation system and higways infrastructure made it easy for people to transfer in shorter time. People can use cars, buses, trains or airplanes to travel from one point to another in a convenient way for a short time. for example, people can travel from New York to London in matter of 8 hours. Such a trip can last for weeks in the previous decades. Moreover, people in the past faced sailing in open seas, depend on camels as a rides and use sun and stars as a nevigation system. However, people nowdays depend on more convenient methods of transportation like cars and much advance nevigation system like G.P.S. Of course, there are negative consequenses to heavy relay on advanced technology as a sole transportation system. for instance, green gas pollution, traffic jams, noise pollution that people never face it in the past. However, their advantages outweigh their disadvantages.
In addition to the previous point, technology significantly change news delivery. In the past people could wait for monthes to preceive information from different site of the word. For instance, It is documented that scientists in Africa waited two monthes to preceive infromation about an experment done on diabetic patient in the United States. However, with introduction of world wide web, scientists in the United States can preform or dimonstrate live experments on animals or human wither their peers in Europ or Africa. Internet made it possible for people to share aboundent information and make our life easier and simplier.
As a conclusion, we can safely say that, even thought we suffer from pollution and overwhelming infromation, life is more easier and covenient than it was before. There is no doubt that a wide selection of transportation system and an eassy access to aboundant information on the internet have changed our life dramatically.
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technology significantly changes news delivery
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life is much easier
Sentence: The question of the pompt is that whether the life is esier and more comfortable than it was in the past or not.
Error: pompt Suggestion: prompt
Error: esier Suggestion: easier
Sentence: Some people beleive that the life in the past was much more easier than it was today.
Error: beleive Suggestion: believe
Sentence: Others hold the opesit opinion.
Error: opesit Suggestion: pest
Sentence: In my view, due to cutting-edge technology, people lifes are more easier and comfortable that it was before.
Error: cutting-edge Suggestion: cutting edge
Sentence: The besis of my view is descripe in the following essay.
Error: descripe Suggestion: describe
Error: besis Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Transportation system and higways infrastructure made it easy for people to transfer in shorter time.
Error: higways Suggestion: highways
Sentence: Moreover, people in the past faced sailing in open seas, depend on camels as a rides and use sun and stars as a nevigation system.
Error: nevigation Suggestion: navigation
Sentence: However, people nowdays depend on more convenient methods of transportation like cars and much advance nevigation system like G.P.S. Of course, there are negative consequenses to heavy relay on advanced technology as a sole transportation system. for instance, green gas pollution, traffic jams, noise pollution that people never face it in the past.
Error: nevigation Suggestion: navigation
Error: nowdays Suggestion: ways
Error: consequenses Suggestion: consequences
Sentence: In the past people could wait for monthes to preceive information from different site of the word.
Error: monthes Suggestion: months
Error: preceive Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: For instance, It is documented that scientists in Africa waited two monthes to preceive infromation about an experment done on diabetic patient in the United States.
Error: infromation Suggestion: information
Error: monthes Suggestion: months
Error: preceive Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: experment Suggestion: experiment
Sentence: However, with introduction of world wide web, scientists in the United States can preform or dimonstrate live experments on animals or human wither their peers in Europ or Africa.
Error: experments Suggestion: experiments
Error: preform Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: dimonstrate Suggestion: demonstrate
Sentence: Internet made it possible for people to share aboundent information and make our life easier and simplier.
Error: aboundent Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: simplier Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: As a conclusion, we can safely say that, even thought we suffer from pollution and overwhelming infromation, life is more easier and covenient than it was before.
Error: infromation Suggestion: information
Error: covenient Suggestion: convenient
Sentence: There is no doubt that a wide selection of transportation system and an eassy access to aboundant information on the internet have changed our life dramatically.
Error: eassy Suggestion: easy
Error: internet Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: aboundant Suggestion: abundant
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 23 2
Double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 23 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 376 350
No. of Characters: 1835 1500
No. of Different Words: 197 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.403 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.88 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.826 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 131 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 87 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.889 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.599 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.313 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.501 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.1 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...eive that the life in the past was much more easier than it was today. Others hold the opes...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 293, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...tting-edge technology, people lifes are more easier and comfortable that it was before. The...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a convenient way" with adverb for "convenient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nes to travel from one point to another in a convenient way for a short time. for example, people c...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...r in a convenient way for a short time. for example, people can travel from New Yor...
^^^
Line 3, column 622, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch advance nevigation system like G.P.S. Of course, there are negative consequens...
^^
Line 3, column 738, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...nology as a sole transportation system. for instance, green gas pollution, traffic ...
^^^
Line 3, column 850, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ople never face it in the past. However, their advantages outweigh their disadvan...
^^
Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...n and overwhelming infromation, life is more easier and covenient than it was before. There...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in short', 'no doubt', 'of course', 'in my view']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.295673076923 0.229887763892 129% => OK
Verbs: 0.112980769231 0.158761421928 71% => OK
Adjectives: 0.09375 0.0866891130778 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0408653846154 0.046263068375 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0408653846154 0.0685040099705 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.149038461538 0.118717715034 126% => OK
Participles: 0.00961538461538 0.0351676179071 27% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.89597298944 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0264423076923 0.0309702414327 85% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0745192307692 0.0887237588012 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0144230769231 0.0209618222197 69% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0139019557991 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2264.0 2387.08602151 95% => OK
No of words: 375.0 408.028673835 92% => OK
Chars per words: 6.03733333333 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.365333333333 0.338922669872 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.250666666667 0.251872472559 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.186666666667 0.174417080927 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130666666667 0.112833075102 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89597298944 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525333333333 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 57.4833641777 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.8571428571 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9971218195 48.84282405 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.80952381 120.699889404 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.5533526081 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.571428571429 0.644075263715 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 42.9238095238 45.7405998639 94% => OK
Elegance: 2.33333333333 1.45489161554 160% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239100177996 0.300154397459 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.120224893485 0.103427244359 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.110014678716 0.0752933317313 146% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.481541143638 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15634277756 0.151897553556 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919736225241 0.114077575197 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909019336814 0.0781384742642 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.303205723955 0.336927656856 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0866490235987 0.067059652881 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19012954692 0.210909579961 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106274622524 0.0618886996521 172% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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