Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Modern life is easier than life in the past.
Use specific details and examples to support your answer.
Humanity has faced so many different challenges from ancient times to todays. Dinasours, wars, illness are some of them. But, undoubtly we are following a progresive way to learn and improve ourselves by putting what we get from our experiments in the past. Besides all these improvements some people can complain about the modern life and think life was easier in the past. However, there are 3 main issues to oppose their ideas. Such as, health, justice and education.
First of all, health is strongest point which is supporting that human life is easier now when we compare it to the past. Can you imagine yourself in Middle Europe with plugge disaster without a vaccine against a dog bite or without your kidneys. There are so many example which can be written here about the matchless disasters which were experienced by humanity in the past. However today there most of the these sickness have a cure. Additionally, science is doing their research for the other illnesses and human life will be easier than today ‘n the future.
Secondly, justice is also a main point for the human life standart. In the ancient time there were no rules about to making people equal. They were mostly running by some dictators who could take everithing when they want. Distinctively, women used to have no right to choose who they want and what they want to be in their future. Workers used to have no right to take a break or being under the healthier conditions. After all of these facts, we should be thankful for todays life standards.
Thirdly, education rights can be seen not important dor most of the people, but in the ancient times the normal people had no right or opportunity to educated their children. This was an activity which can be done by just religion leaders or novels. Can you imagine Steve Jobs in a factory as a worker because he was an immigrant’s baby. After a while, normal people also started to education, for instance my father was walking 5 kilometers five days in a week to reach to his school. However, today almost everybody have opportunity to reach the eduction. We have more opportunity to get the eduction, there are even online courses are exist and who wants to reach them can use.
As a conlusion, there is no logic to claim about the the human life was easier in the past. We are living just a few clicks away from the most of the our necessities. When we compare it with a person who needs to walk everyday to find a water source is so unfair. Today’s people have better health, justice and education system and opportunities to reach them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
Humanity has faced so many different challenges from ancient times to todays...
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Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the strongest'.
Suggestion: is the strongest
...and education. First of all, health is strongest point which is supporting that human li...
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Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun example seems to be countable; consider using: 'many examples'.
Suggestion: many examples
...e or without your kidneys. There are so many example which can be written here about the mat...
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Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this sickness' or 'these sicknesses'?
Suggestion: this sickness; these sicknesses
...e past. However today there most of the these sickness have a cure. Additionally, science is d...
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Line 7, column 645, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...tion, there are even online courses are exist and who wants to reach them can use. ...
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Line 9, column 50, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...usion, there is no logic to claim about the the human life was easier in the past. We a...
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Line 9, column 50, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...usion, there is no logic to claim about the the human life was easier in the past. We a...
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Line 9, column 147, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'our'?
Suggestion: the; our
...just a few clicks away from the most of the our necessities. When we compare it with a ...
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Line 9, column 168, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y from the most of the our necessities. When we compare it with a person who needs t...
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Line 9, column 219, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...pare it with a person who needs to walk everyday to find a water source is so unfair. To...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, after all, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2148.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72087912088 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53103427966 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512087912088 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 683.1 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5742372556 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5555555556 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8518518519 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85185185185 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150175081804 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399516996564 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616140173102 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945783676394 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678894049104 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.