Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e-mail, they will produce better work for the project.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Working in a group with a few numbers of members or even a large number is something unavoidable especially during our time in university or even in job. And the communication between group members plays a crucial role in the success of the project that group work on. while some people prefer to communicate with other members of the group by e-mail or messages. Others instead believe that communicating in person is better .Personally, I believe that communication between group members should be in person for many reasons . in the following paragraphs, my reasons are going to be clarified by details and examples.
First of all, members of the group who keep in touch by gathering and talk face to face would understand their project and work better than the members who communicate by e-mail. Communicate in person guarantee the understanding of the project from its all sides . in addition to that this way of communication would also guarantee comprehension of everyone's opinion and understanding their thoughts. For instance, during working in my graduation project in my last semester at the university, I used to meet the other members in the project twice weekly which made our work so much easier by exchanging the ideas between us.
Secondly, communicate in person would build and improve the communication channels between group members and as a result that strengthen the bonds between colleagues.
Strong bonds between the group members always play a pivotal role in the success of the project. however, weak communication channels between group members would cut the chance of the projects' success. For instance, last week I watched a program about working in a group and the lecturer said that about 70 % of projects ' success is based on the communication and the bond between the members.
To sum up, communication in person has many positive sides and advantages, like strengthen the bonds between the members and guarantee a better understanding of the project and the work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, in addition, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16819571865 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9493131603 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45871559633 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2463281442 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.714285714 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3571428571 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227520979739 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998161903614 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447727078118 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143011349796 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424784929112 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.