Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are
When it comes to the issue of that most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are, some people may agree with this statement and give us sound reason for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree with this idea and have different opinions. Also, those opponent could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts. I believe that most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are because there are so many reasons support my point of view. This short essay will demonstrate some points regarding this issue in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that most advertisements make products seem much better than they really are. There is a huge competition between the companies now. In order to compete the costumers, those companies make an advertisements with unbelievable things to attract the people for their products by watching their advertisement. For instance, the advertisement’s actor fly and jump from the high building after they drink the product.
Another reason why I advocate the attitude of that advertisement not really show how the products seem. The advertisements are talk about the good things and the advantage of the products. So, it is impossible to know the side effects and the disadvantage things of the products which are neglected by the advertisements.
Finally, it is a well-established fact that when there is a comparison between two products. The advertisement of the specific product compare it result with unknown and poor qualified product result in order to show the viewers the big differences and cheat them.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion that says, people who hold the opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people opinions are overwhelming too much to be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... really are. There is a huge competition between the companies now. In order to c...
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Line 4, column 244, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an advertisement' or simply 'advertisements'?
Suggestion: an advertisement; advertisements
...ete the costumers, those companies make an advertisements with unbelievable things to attract the...
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Line 8, column 147, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'results'?
Suggestion: results
...ment of the specific product compare it result with unknown and poor qualified product...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'regarding', 'so', 'well', 'for instance', 'first of all', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221574344023 0.229887763892 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.157434402332 0.158761421928 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0845481049563 0.0866891130778 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0466472303207 0.046263068375 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.064139941691 0.0685040099705 94% => OK
Prepositions: 0.107871720117 0.118717715034 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0204081632653 0.0351676179071 58% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.97053661334 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0233236151603 0.0309702414327 75% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.128279883382 0.0887237588012 145% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0174927113703 0.0209618222197 83% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0233236151603 0.0139019557991 168% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1918.0 2387.08602151 80% => OK
No of words: 312.0 408.028673835 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.14743589744 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.323717948718 0.338922669872 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25 0.251872472559 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.189102564103 0.174417080927 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.121794871795 0.112833075102 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97053661334 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535256410256 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 55.5926156305 59.2087087015 94% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 22.2857142857 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6452824257 48.84282405 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.0 120.699889404 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.644075263715 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 47.2857142857 45.7405998639 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.30434782609 1.45489161554 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357531263536 0.300154397459 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.144703258364 0.103427244359 140% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.111908578383 0.0752933317313 149% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.583755138762 0.497263757937 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.209370460823 0.151897553556 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150478502647 0.114077575197 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105917829094 0.0781384742642 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.363246289639 0.336927656856 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.12540079646 0.067059652881 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211703180452 0.210909579961 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116141544953 0.0618886996521 188% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.6433691756 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.