Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part-time job.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue that one of the best way parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them to take a part time job, some people may agree with this idea and us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree and have different opinion. Also, those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts. I believe that parents can prepare their children to face the adult life by encouraging them to work part time job because there are so many reasons. This short essay will demonstrate some point regarding my point of view in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that the life today is very hard. If the child learns how to earn money during his early life stage, he will be more dependent in the future. Eventually, he will be more dependent person because he spends his free time doing thing that has long term impact instead of wasting his time. However, the free time will lead to spoil the teenage people, if they do not exploit it in good things.
Another point why I advocate that the parents must encourage their teenage children to work is the rapid life that we are living in it today. The work builds the children personalities by learning them how to manage their time and resources. Additionally, the child can learn different skills which has great consequences in his future for instance, the child can learn how to work as a team and how to build nice relations with different type of people. On the other hand, if the child never enters the working field early, he will face many obstacles.
Finally, it is a well-established fact that the part type jobs increase the child’s knowledge and help him to detect which field he prefers. If the child works in different field, he will be able to detect the specialty which suit his character. Moreover, he will be able to put a good picture to his future. However, the child whom never works early, he may take bad decision regarding his future.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion, which says that, people who hold opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people opinions are overwhelmingly too much to be ignored
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 147, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ult life is to encourage them to take a part time job, some people may agree with this id...
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Line 2, column 507, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... adult life by encouraging them to work part time job because there are so many reasons. ...
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Line 4, column 299, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'termed'.
Suggestion: termed
...his free time doing thing that has long term impact instead of wasting his time. How...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, for instance, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6683046683 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42426843291 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501228501229 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6126407377 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.764705882 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9411764706 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283116095158 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958222147156 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137163095743 0.0737576698707 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146378777438 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.172862993359 0.0645574589148 268% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.